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𝐉𝐮𝐝𝐠𝐞- _universewrites
Winner (1st Place)
Book Title: Fire on Ice
Cover. 5/5
Title. 5/5
Blurb. 8/10
Plot. 18/20
Grammar and Vocabulary. 20/20
Character and Development. 9/10
Writing Style. 19/20
Overall Emotion/ Enjoyment. 8/10
Total: 92/100
Review/ Final Note:
I was captivated from the get go. That's amazing. Your style has some kind of flow to it. I can tell you had some good attitudes about the story. All I can say is try describing emotions with the perfect adjectives. This is more than potential, honestly. Or else I wouldn't have given my small piece of advice.
Your story is truly amazing. Keep going.
1st Runner up (2nd Place)
Book Title: Across The Street
Cover. 4/5
Title. 4/5
Blurb. 9/10
Plot. 18/20
Grammar and Vocabulary. 19/20
Character and Development. 8/10
Writing Style. 18/20
Overall Emotion/ Enjoyment. 9/10
Total: 89/100
Review/ Final Note:
The author has a lot of potential if they put a little more effort and try to work more on their imagination, some parts were done very nicely although I can feel the lack of emotion and willingness in the book.
2nd Runner up (3rd Place)
Book Title: Hate Feels Just Like True Love.
Cover. 4/5
Title. 4/5
Blurb. 9/10
Plot. 17/20
Grammar and Vocabulary. 19/20
Character and Development. 9/10
Writing Style. 17/20
Overall Emotion/ Enjoyment. 8/10
Total: 87/100
Review/ Final Note:
That was an awesome story. The characters were introduced and described well. A lot of the time we could put ourselves in the shoes of the characters and relate to them. While it's good to use vocabulary from time to time, use simple English for the majority. Remember, we are telling a story, delivering messages. We should be able to understand for us to enjoy.
No qualms here. A good story. Looking forward to completing it! Have fun!
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