Okay guys I want to dedicate this chapter to saraboo177 and writer_reader1 even though I don't know you two that well and you live in Arizona I thought you were pretty cool that one time we jumped on the trampoline together. Im glad you are aspiring writers and look forward to your soon to come works. Any who I can't write a lot for a little bit, things have been hectic. However, when I get out of school, June 4th, I will have plenty of time. I don't really know where this story is going but I want to know who you like the most out of the six characters. But unfortunately today my friend said my book was confusing, and I agree with her. So I don't know if I'll continue or not. They pointed out how Ivy is black and shouldn't have gray eyes, and how my writing format was all wrong, and that the characters had stupid names so yeah. I don't even know anymore.
Ps whoever gets the most comments has greatest character has a higher chance of surviving.
Ciao my friends.
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Escaping Osiris
General FictionThree girls are awakened in a strange place, a house of mysteries and wonder. To escape they have to connect the six items hidden with out the house to their counterparts, but the house holds many secrets. If they don't find it this year they will d...
