Rejected plot: Lightning

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This was for an unrequested Lightning.

Lightning likes Y/N and constantly tries to ask her out. The problem is; She doesn't trust him. After Lightning constantly tries to gain her trust, she eventually falls for him.

Reasons I rejected it:

• I feel this will make Lightning a bit out of character. I feel like he wouldn't try to gain someone's trust and would move on.

• I believe the story would be way to repetitive and in circles with Lightning trying to gain Y/N's trust and her rejecting him over and over.

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