Rejected TD plot - Mal x reader x Noah (Choose endings)

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Plot: Y/N thinks Noah is cheating on her. Then she seeks solace with Mal. But turns out, Noah did not cheat on Y/N and it was all a setup by Heather and Alejandro. Y/N has to choose if she still loves Noah or if she wants to explore her newfound connection with Mal.

Why was this rejected?

• It doesn't make sense at all why Y/N would find solace in Mal of all people. Mal is so manipulative, he would most likely use her vulnerability for personal gain.

I know that in fanfics, we always portray him as protective and caring towards his love interest, but in canon, he's vile. He's not a good love interest tbh.

• I feel like it'd make more sense if it was a setup by Mal himself rather than Heather or Alejandro, since Mal was Y/N's new love interest here.

• A love triangle between Noah and Mal doesn't make sense at all.

Overall, at first I thought this would be interesting but it ended up being off balance and weird.

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⏰ Last updated: Nov 16, 2023 ⏰

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