Shivin : Our Painful Love Story

Chapter 5

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Scene starts from:

M: Kucch bhi nhi hua h....vo bs tumhare legs ki nerves shock k karan affected h...ye bas thode din mein thik ho jaayega... don't worry hm..and kissed her forehead.

Sh: pkka na...kahin m... Mohsin put his hand on her mouth..

M: socho bhi mt us baare mein...

Sh: par..

M: koi par var nhi...

Sh: sorry😌

M: it's ok...

Am: Beta...ab thik h naa jyada pain to nhi h...

Sh: nhi ammi...jyada nhi bs thoda thoda...

Am: ye bhi jldi thik ho jayega...

M: hmm..agar Bina stress liye ye madam rest krengi to...

Am: mohsin...

All went out of the room only shivin was there...

Mohsin half laid on bed beside her and take her hand in his...

M: jaan tum pkka thik ho na...

Sh: Haan baba...

M: chalo tum ek kaam kro do min betho m aaya...

Sh: kuchh kaam h kya??aap jaiye agar kuchh important ho to...waise bhi abbu to yahaan h nhi... sajjad pr jyada pressure hoga na kaam ka...

M: madam...shaant m kitchen mein khaana lene Jaa rha hu...

Sh: ok... sorry..

M: don't worry...sb thik h vahan..

Sh: mohsin...

M: Haan...

Sh: aap bahar se zeba di Mehek ya ammi ko bhej do ek baar...

M: kyu ? Kya hua? Tumhe kuchh chahiye? M deta hu na...

Sh: (hesitating) vo...mujhe washroom use karna tha...bs isiliye..

M: ok...ZEBA...ek baar aana...

Z: Haan bhai...

M: vo shivi ko kuchh kaam h...

Z: Hmm..m jaati hu..

Sh: di vo mujhe washroom use karna hai...aap please meri thodi help krdenge..

Z: ye koi puchhne ki baat h...

Sh: thanks...

Z: ye sb baad mein...abhi chle..
aaram se...ek second..

Next Morning 🌅:

Moh was doing massage on her legs ...

Sh: aap rhne dijiye bas...aap pura din mere aage pichhe ghumte rhte  h...aapko bhi to rest ki jarurat h...aapko bhi to lgi h na .. phir bhi aap mere aage pichhe ghum rhe ho...or ek m.. apne aap se bed PR Beth bhi nhi skti...

M: hogya tumhara ya abhi bhi kuchh baaki h...yaar tum hr baat p khud ko blame kyu krti ho? mujhe na...baat hi krni...tum rest kro m aaya...

Sh(holds his hand) (teary eyed): sorry...i know m aapko bhaut hurt krti hu..but pta nhi...mujhe na failure wali feeling aati h...sab mere aage pichhe ghumte h...mikhu..vo to itna Chhota h phir bhi..mera itna khayal rakhta h...Mehek aur sajjad ...vo dono apni life ko chodd kr hamari responsibilities ko pura kr rhe h...Mehek vo bechari pura din kita thak jaati h...ghar ka kaam phir office ka...aur ammi unhe is Umar mein..rest karna chaiye vo...unhe bilkul bhi rest nhi mil rha h...pta h kabhi kabhi na ...m sochti hu..kaash m us accident mein mar ..

But moh stop her from saying further...

M: chup ...ek dam chup...kya bakwas bol rhi ho tum...shivi...i can understand sab thoda out of track ho gya h...but hm sambhal lenge... don't worry..aur rhi baat family ki to...agar bhagwan na kre...kisi or ko kuchh ho jaata to hm kya krte...yhi na...so please ab ye sab sochna band kro ...or dawai Kahan h??li tumne??

Sh: nhi...mujhe vo achh nhi lgti...usse na vomit jaise ho jaata h...or phir

M: tum mikhu...ko bahana bna kr chocolate khati ho...h na..

Sh: nhi.. nhi to...

M: juth bole kava kaate...

Sh: aapko kaise pata...

M: pati hu tumhara..sab pta h...ab tumhara chamcha mujhi se fridge open krva kr... chocolate lega vo bhi...vo vaali jo usne Aaj tk taste bhi nhi ki h to...

Sh: sorry 🙈..

M: it's ok...

Precap: Mohsin shocking decision...

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