𝕃𝔾𝔹𝕋ℚ+ 𝕣𝕖𝕤𝕦𝕝𝕥𝕤

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Everyone we are here to announce the results for LGBTQ+ category.

Thanks to our judge:SakshiYadav591


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And the winner is 

Ancilla by seraDrake

1.Cover: 3.5/05The cover is simple and good. It can be more good.

2.Title: 05/05The title is really good and match with the story. 

3.Blurb/ Description: 04/05The description is good but I think it can be much better with little more details about story. 

4.Writing Style: 05/05The writing style is really good I really love how everything was explained.The words used are really good. 

 5.Story phase: 05/05The story pace is perfect. It create the suspense throughout the story. 

 6.Grammer and Vocabulary: 10/10The Grammer and Vocabulary is perfect. The words used are outstanding. 

 7.Plot: 04/05The plot and suspenses in the story are amazing. 

 8.Emotional Impact: 05/10It doesn't have a great emotional Impact on me but I was amazed for some time for sure. 

 9.Readers Engagement: 10/10The readers will definitely love the story. I can say that if one start read they will bot stop before finishing it. 

 10.Overall Enjoyment: 19/20I really enjoyed the story. While reading the story I felt like I was is another world. The story is really mind blowing. 

Total: 70.5/80

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But lets not forgot our other entry who is equally deserving

Kabuki by CrysTravel2019 

 1.Cover: 04/05The cover is really good but I think it can be little more attractive. 

 2.Title: 05/05The title is simple and match with the story 

 3.Blurb/ Description: 05/05The description is really great. It perfectly tell what the story is about. 

 4.Writing Style: 04/05The writing style is good 

 5.Story phase: 05/05The story phase is neither too slow nor too fast. 

 6.Grammer and Vocabulary: 07/10There are some part where the Grammer was wrong. The words are repeated again and again but instead of it the pronoun can be used. 

 7.Plot: 03/05The story doesn't have much plot 

 8.Emotional Impact: 04/10There is no emotional part in the story. 

 9.Readers Engagement: 09/10The story is really interesting. The reader might enjoy reading it. 

 10.Overall Enjoyment: 18/20I really the story. This stroy is something which I might not perfer reading at first but after I start reading i really got engaged in the story. 

 Total: 64/80



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