IIII - 〄Lovey-Dovey (This Time With People Your Own Age)

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〄Number four - Lovey Dovey (This time with people your own age (Hopefully))

Right, so if you are making two charects (wether its OCxOC or OCxAnyMainCharecterJustPleaseNotSnape) you. Have. To. Give. It. Time.

Like, seriously. I get love at frist site and crap (Pardon my french, im probably gonna swear alot) like that but puleezz gorly pops.

This is HARRY POTTER. Not GREY'S ANATOMY. Trust me, George Weasley isn't gonna be seeing freakin 'Sunshine Melody Potters' Anatomy in Chapter 4 Line 8. Is he??

Maybie give them some time. Like wait till your atleast in the middle of the book or a little after that until they announce their feelings.

This ain't sims 4. You have to develop a friendship first you cant just click the 'Whisper Sweet Nothings' button and have them swooning for you.

Example:

I walked up to Draco and said, "Hey pwitty boy. Ily"

"I shall tell my father about this"

"🙄🙄🙄🙄" i sighhheeedd, "Finneee, i will go kiss Hawwyy Pottaaa"

"ILYYYYYYYYY. MARREEEE MEEEEE"

"ILYSM DWACCCOOOO MAWWWFFFOOOOYYYYY"

"good becausee we are married this is our son jeff and our daughter joff"

"😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜"

End of chapter 2

HELL NO GURLY POPS

All im saying is atleast let your oc find out if their Crush has a pet or idk siblings or something. JUST LET THEM TALK!!

PLEEEEEEZZZZZEEEEE.

PublishedSunday 21st April 2024.

(A/n: Please tall me some more things about Harry Potter that annoy you or things that you might need tips on.

Also have an amazing day and/or night <3 <3 <3 <3)

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