Lake Compounce
Enterprise Dr
Bristol, Connecticut
Inner Critic: Where do I get my season pass?
People: *walking towards the entrance*
Marjorie: Over here, Inner Critic!
Inner Critic: Okay.
Marjorie: Do you have your ID?
Inner Critic: *takes out his ID and shows it*
Lake Compounce Man: Stand still, so I can take your photo.
Inner Critic: For what?
Girl: For the season pass, stupid!
Inner Critic: Shut up!
Marjorie: Leave her alone!
Inner Critic: She started it! *gets his photo taken*
Lake Compounce Man: Here you go, now get lost.
Inner Critic: People are so rude. *walks off to the rides*
Marjorie: Inner Critic, wait up please!
Inner Critic: *goes on the Ghost Ride*
Marjorie: Get out of there!
Inner Critic: *does what he is told*
Marjorie: *grabs his and spanks him* When I say wait up, you wait up! Do you understand me?!
Inner Critic: You spanked me!
Marjorie: I said, do you understand me?!
Inner Critic: Yes, Ma'am!
Marjorie: Let's grab some food first!
Inner Critic: I want to go on the rides!
Marjorie: Want to go home?
Inner Critic: No!
Marjorie: Then you will listen to me! Now, come on!
Inner Critic: *sighs*
Marjorie: You want a burger from Johnny Rockets?
Inner Critic: I guess.
Teenage Girl: *carrying dead alligator in her arms*
Inner Critic: *stares at the teenage girl*
Marjorie: It's not nice to stare.
Inner Critic: *still staring*
Marjorie: *spanks Inner Critic again* Did you not hear me?!
Inner Critic: Sorry!
Marjorie: Tell him what do you want!
Inner Critic: Can I have a cheeseburger, please?
This story was written on Sunday, June 9th, 2024.
A/N Inner Critic is at Lake Compounce, but he's gonna have a rough time! 😅😅😅😅😅😅 Don't be a silent reader. Please leave feedback. Thanks.
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