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{Keeri}✨ The Celestial Odyssey

🍓Dive into a thrilling cosmic adventures in the book “The Celestial Odyssey" where gods of the Milky Way go on an epic journey beyond realms, facing intense battles and exploring uncharted territories!🍓

🍓Cover: 3.8/5

•The cover is great and looks good.
•It features the fantasy elements well, with earth, stars, and the whole cosmic detail along with the Father, God. It fits the story well.
•However, I feel like the author could have done better in terms of the fonts and the font color used on the cover.
•Since this is your first book and you're new to all of this, I recommend using apps such as Canva, Adobe Express, and PicsArt. They are excellent for creating stunning and appealing covers and are free to use.
•Even though we are taught not to judge a book by its cover, the sad truth is that the first thing everyone judges a book by is its cover.
•So, with some more editing and time, I know you can improve it by using the apps I suggested.
•Also, the size of the cover used on Wattpad is 512px by 800px. Your cover doesn't seem to fit this size, and we can clearly see that the title is almost cut off on the front of the cover.
•So, when you edit a new cover in the future, I suggest you create it in the sizes I mentioned.
•Additionally, adding your name at the bottom of the cover would make it more perfect.✨

🍓Title : 4.8/5

•The title "The Celestial Odyssey" is truly captivating and amazing, and the words used are perfect.
•"Celestial" relates to outer space or the universe beyond Earth, while "Odyssey" means a long adventurous journey.
•The title is well-suited for a book that's about the gods of each planet going on an adventurous journey beyond their realm.
•However, it feels like you could add a subtitle to the main title to provide even more context or intrigue, for example : “The Celestial Odyssey : Journey through the realm."
•I'll reiterate that there's nothing wrong with the title. It's just a suggestion from me, and it's perfectly alright if you decide not to use it.
•Overall, the title is perfect! Well done, author! ✨

🍓Blurb : 4.9/5

•From my perspective, I found the blurb direct and intriguing.
•As a reader, it feels perfect to me because it instantly piqued my interest.
•It's straightforward about what's happening and hints at what might unfold in the future, while also introducing the Milky Way solar system, its gods, and the father.
•However, since this is an action/adventure genre, I feel like leaving a suspenseful question at the end of the blurb, such as asking what might happen in the ongoing war between Kal and Satan, would make it even more interesting.

🍓 Character development : 3.2/5

•Everything was great, especially with the introduction of the characters in the first chapter.
•However, in the following chapters, I feel like there isn't much development between the characters and I can't understand their emotions well.
•Understanding the characters' emotions within a well-planned plot is crucial, and portraying and executing their traits and personalities is even more important.
•Even though the author introduced them well in the first chapter, there should be ongoing development in the subsequent chapters.
•Emotions should be shown in their conversations, and most importantly, the characters' own point of view dialogues should be included, which I couldn't see well in the story.
•Of course, there are many characters, including the gods of each planet, but giving them some common dialogues or adding emotions to their voices is essential for the story to be more engaging.
•It’s an action/adventure plot, but I can't see any emotions displayed in the story, and I have to say that it felt plain reading it because the characters don't seem well-developed and need more structure.
•So, I suggest the author add more individual dialogues and depth to the emotions of the characters in the story. ✨

🍓Plot : 7.8/10

•The plot is something really new for me. The cosmic realms, planets, gods, the father of the gods, and everything else are quite novel.
•It's a thrilling plot, and I want to give the author a round of applause for coming up with such a creative storyline. The gods clashing with each other, and then the god of war, Kal, crashing down to Earth with the god of time chasing him, was all great and showed a high level of creativity.
•However, since the genre is action/adventure, I feel like the plot didn't fully explore the adventures and journeys undertaken by the gods beyond the realm.
•The plot is great with good creativity, but throughout the story, it seems to be not well portrayed, which I will discuss in the grammar/vocabulary category.
•Also, if the author wants the plot to be well understood, I suggest adding more depth to the gods' journey and the fights between them.
•Additionally, the pacing seems too fast, with the journey and then quickly the war starting. So, I suggest the author slow down the pacing a bit and write the story at a more balanced pace. ✨

🍓Grammar/Vocabulary : 7/10

•The writing skills used in the book are great, but there are many spelling mistakes, and the absence of commas and full stops is widely noticeable.
•The writing style is unique but still doesn't portray the emotions of the characters well.
•The journeys and adventures taken up by the gods could have been written better. Since this is an action/adventure genre book, the adventures could be described in more detail, and the war between Satan and the other gods could also be more descriptive, along with the introduction of the new character named Mathew in the 4th chapter.
•Throughout the book, if I had to be honest, it doesn't feel much like an action/adventure genre to me. The blurb was more intriguing than the story itself. I feel like the writings in the story need more structures.
•So, I suggest the author make the plot more descriptive and also edit the initial chapters to correct the spelling mistakes. The plot is really creative, but without strong writing, it could be overshadowed. I hope the author can understand my point of view. 🌟

🍓Overall Impression : 8/10

•Overall, the book "The Celestial Odyssey" has an interesting plot.
•Since this is the author's first book, I feel like she has done a good job, and I must say this is just the beginning.
•She can learn more and improve her writing if she continues and takes up the suggestions I gave her.
•And I want to praise her again for her creativity in crafting the plot because it is indeed a good story. Well done, author! ✨ Great job! 🌟🍓

🍓Final marks : 40/50

🍓Last note :

•For the character development and visuals that you have mentioned in the expectations question in the form, I suggest finding images on the internet that portray your characters well. Adding these images can help readers better understand their appearances. Additionally, adding the visuals of the Milky Way, solar system, and planets can make the book more aesthetic, intriguing, and enjoyable for readers. For the character development, I have already discussed the issue.

•And I believe I've provided enough pointers in the above categories.

•However, if you have any doubts or need more assistance, please feel free to reach out to me!☺️ I am ready to help you with your first book and would gladly assist a fellow author! Thank you!✨🌟

Reviewer : Yoonkeeri
Author of the book : TheDannyFisher

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