Dyma's Maiden

My Compiled Comments

Baguhan niyo lang po ako’ng reader, just recently discovered your TFRB story (just last month lang), at agad ako’ng nahumaling sa pagbabasa. Natapos ko agad iyon syempre, pati na rin iyo’ng Dama story niyo, and I must say, kahit hindi talaga masyado’ng bitchy iyo’ng kay Dama compared to Meg, the palitan of maanghang words are still alive and very much interesting. But then naiinis ako kasi masyado po kayong tukso kasi inakala ko talaga’ng si Pierre na talaga iyon pero... Oliver pala at nabunot ko tuloy buhok ko ng the MAX. Pero mabuti na rin iyon kasi maka-Zelo ako... pero nasan na ba siya? Kainis naman kasi missing in action na siya. Hayan tuloy, kapag may tumatawag kay Dama ine-expect ko’ng ‘sana si Zelo na iyon, si Zelo na’ pero ate, ang hilig mo talaga’ng manukso, kasi kung hindi iyong kabarkada niya ang tumawag, si Oliver pa rin. Kainis. Get rid of Oliver, he’s such a waste in the story! IS what I thought but then I can’t (or we?) erase the fact that he somehow spices up the story, aside from the mysterious ‘Pierre Alessander’.  But then I got a hint of who that guy is... could he be Zelo?... Si Zelo?... Si Zelo ba?... Si Zelo ba, ate?? I mean, make-up family lang naman iyo’ng Nasino family diba so, even the whole persona of Zelo is mysterious, para lang si Pierre Alessander (lagyan ko na ng ‘Alessander’ kasi kapag Pierre lang, naalala ko si Oliver). But anyways, mananahimik na lang ako about this topic kasi balang araw mabubunyag din lahat ng ‘to, and IF dalawang identity talaga si Zelo at si Pierre Alessander, at nakatuluyan talaga ni Dama iyo’ng huli... saan ka ba nakatira ate? Idedespatya kita.. HAHAHA...

But so much with the fuss, I’m quite assure na iisa lang ang dalawang ito kasi aside that they’re both ‘mysterious’, pareho din nilang nakilala si Dama back on the childhood days. Do I sound harsh? I don’t think so, MAS harsh si Meg. c: And speaking of Meg, I like what you did on her character, ate. She’s a bitch with a heart, well, cold heart at first but then it melts and I like the fact that you make your character learn a lesson not just to herself, to her love, but as well to her family. In my opinion, Meg somewhat represents the many aspects of a woman’s bitchiness: the lack of trust, to be betrayed, iyo’ng masingitan sa pila, iyo’ng nadidedma ka ng tindera or should I say – the bias of this world, jealousy, the hardships of being pregnant (though I haven’t experience it so far), and the concerns of understanding her daughter or children. Simply put, Meg is like a warning for the woman out there and even though I’m not a married person, yet, may natutunan pa rin ako kay Meg, that is understanding, expressing, and be true to yourself. Huwag magtago sa dilim cuz we’re never safe in the dark, baka huli na ng mapansin mo’ng there’s a big staircase down your way and you trip over, and you already realized it... in your deathbed. O, de nagsisi ka, pero huli na. Buti na lang, sa case ni Meg, Dani didn’t give up and you’re right, ate, Dani’s like a dream guy of every girls (isa na ako dun).

Mahaba na ba ang pinagsasabi ko? Ay, mahaba na nga, so I’ll stop here na. Baka isipin ng ibang makabasa dito na nagFC-FChan ako, but nope, I’m just compiling my comments here kasi nga hindi ako nakakapag-comment sa mga stories niya and all the reason is stated above already. I know one shot I made heads to something cliche – the arranged marriage thingy – but hey, I’m the FIRST DAUGHTER of this country, so be DEAD. Hahaha... kidding, I just wanted to show that not everybody likes Dirham especially the FIRST DAUGHTER. Besides, I do think that lolo Stephen is concern about the welfare of Dylan kasi nga hindi na rin magtatagal ang buhay niya, and he knows this FIRST DAUGHTER will not take advantage of his apo AND she pretty much reminded of the two girls he knew, so there, he arranged a marriage. HAHA... Nagsisimula na namang humaba ito so.... ahm, yeah, good luck on your works na lang, ate!