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today was the last day or part one of training and one of the leaders were so post to come and talk to us today we were all in in a group even the duantless born and I seen max walk in he said " if you're ranked above the red line you'll move onto the second stage of training if your below it we'll waist no more time on you" I looked at him and bit my lip I was extremely nervous he then said "here are you're rankings" I let out a breath the I watched names fill the board I smiled as I seen my name next to the number 20 above the red line Chris hugged me and will said "you made it tay" max then said "ok your free to go today's visiting day " I walked away and to the room I sat down in the bed and Chris said " you coming to the pit for visiting day" I shook my head and said "my parents aren't coming" she said "you never know, please just come for me" I sighed and got up and walked to the pit as soon as we got there she squealed and ran and hugged and man and women that looked like her I smiled at her and went to walk out when I felt somebody grab my arm I turned around and seen eric he said "were you going"? I said "to my room" he said " you not gonna wait for your people" I looked down and shook my head no he said " wanna take a walk" i nodded and then you both started walked around out of the pit you guys were on a roof top and was just sitting there it was a comfortable silence though. I herd eric sigh and say "listed taylor about the other day in the training room, I'm sorry" I looked at him and said "for what you didn't do anything" he said "I made you feel bed" I looked at him and smiled an said "I didn't know you couldn apologize to people" he laughed at little bit an I was "wow and I said as hell didn't know you could laugh" this time you both laughed a little he looked at you and got up he grabbed your hand and pulled you up with him he looked down at you in your eyes an you looked up at him in his he then leaned down and kissed you you were taken by surprise a little bit but you kissed back your arms found there way around his neck and his to your waist. It was a soft but kinda fast kiss he then pulled away an looked at you sighed and said " why did you do that" he said "because I wanted to" you sighed and untangled yourself from the man you just kissed and you ran down the stairs off the roof and into the pit you bumped into somebody and fell you looked up and seen it was max. He helped you up and you just looked at him and started to walk away he said " tay come on" I said " max please go away" an kept walking he grabbed your hand and said "dad made me" you turned to him and said "what"? He looked at you and said "dad made me leave he said if I didn't he was going to kill you, he said if I leave he promises not to kill you" I said " why didn't you tell me that" he said "he told me not to tell anybody" I breather in trying to hold my tears in he hugged me and and I let my tears fall he said " come on" and you both walked back to your room he stopped outside the door and I said "max can you do me a favor and not let anyone know were related" he looked at you and said "geez are you really that a shame of me" I smiled and said "no I just don't want people to treat me any different because your my brother, I want to know I made it into dauntless because I was good enough not because max was my brother" he smiled and nodded I then walked into the room and laid down and drifter off to sleep

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