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Dumped at the age of 10 with her brother to live with her grandparents, Demi Stevens fresh out of high school and only 17, joined the rodeo circuit with her best friend Piper to live her life and chase her dream at being...
Okay everyone. This book is crap. How do you all put up with it. I will leave this book up until the new year (December or January) to give you all a chance to read the chapter I just posted and to read this ! IMPORTANT AUTHORS NOTE ! I just went back and re read the chapters I've posted and (going to cuss) they're fucking shit!
Examples of the "sh*t" • parts don't make sense. there are parts where someone says something and the next chapter there is a lot more added to it, plus other random parts that don't make sense • it is boring asf • there are characters I've said I'm going to add and haven't or have added and it's confusing • THE PLOT IS CONFUSING AS HECK • characters are messed up (in more ways than one 😉) • the story lacks excitement and isn't very creative and doesn't entice the reader to keep reading, hence the reason there aren't many votes • some parts are fake for example Natasha drives a truck when she's only just turned 17 which means in Aus she's only just got what we call P plates which means she can only JUST drive by herself without a guardian in the vehicle (What we call Learners ~ L plates ~ is when you must have a guardian with you in the car AT ALL TIMES and you must drive 100 hours and have been driving for a year to revive your P plates). V8 motor cars are also not permitted to be driven by a P plate driver, the story doesn't state she drives it as it "sits in the shed back at her grandparents place" but this could be implied. So to sum everything up Natasha wouldn't have received a truck license. I'm not sure what a truck is called in America but it's not a pick up truck if a truck is mentioned in this story. In England I'm pretty sure they're called lorries. Basically a truck in Aus is what livestock is transported in.
So with that said I'm going to leave it up for now and take it down and fix EVERYTHING. This may take a few months knowing me or it could take only a few hours as I'm a strange kid. So please bare with me and re read the chapters after they have been improved. Thanks everyone and sorry if you though this was a double update. Once again thanks for 5k reads. It means so much. Love you all 💗
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