a relationship on a deathbed

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His eyes were suffocated.

He was drowning in his sorrow,

holding his breath

until the world around him faded - piece

by piece.

His tongue dripped of gasoline.

He was bursting into flames in front of me,

turning into ashes - piece

by piece.

Everytime I built a boat of comfort,

tried to extinguish his pain,

the more he wanted to disappear.

"You can't save a dead boy."

They were right, I let him find someone else

to teach him what he wants.

He just doesn't want to be saved.

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