One Direction Kidnapped Me/Wattys 2018

chapter 3

Last time on 1D kidnapped me
I opened the window and pretended to jump out I went under the sink and hid behind the towels and I heard them talking although it was more like whispering the next thing I know I'm being pulled out from underneath the sink I start kicking and hitting whoever grabbed me "shh shh sweetie calm down" he said " why isn't she screaming or crying?" another one asked he just shrugs his shoulders "sweetie why don't you say hi?" he asks I wave my hand at them "no not waving your hand talk please" he says I shook my head and did a writing motion with my hand " pen and paper?" the guy with curly brown hair says I nod my head yes he goes and grabs it. He comes back after a minute goes by and hands me a notebook and a pen I wrote I can't talk I'm mute my vocal cords don't work. I hand it back to him " oh mates she's mute" he says I point back to the notebook he gives it back I wrote why am I here, who are you, what do you want, and get me out of this stupid onsie and diaper!. I handed it back to him

Please review and tell me what you think this is my first I have ever showed to the public so I'm kinda nervous about it.