"I stared into his green orbs as he stared into mine"
Orbs? Are you serious. You can't go up to someone and say "wow I love your orbs!" Like no just please stop writing orbs instead of orbs how about you use EYES. Wouldent "I stared into his beautiful green eyes as he stared into mine" sound better than "I stared into his beautiful green orbs as he stared into mine"
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Dumb Fanfiction Moments
Fanfictionintroducing dumb fanfiction moments, where i tell you all the moments in fanfics that are just .. dumb. // made in 2013 so if there's any spelling mistakes DONT point them out \\
