Saying who's there is a really dumb idea.

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This is a story that I'm actually quite proud of, its the kind of story that I like to write a lot. I hope you like it and please tell me any spelling mistakes, I hate it when I'm reading a story and then there's this really misspelt word, it annoys me so much!

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I walked along the darkened forest path. The wind rustled the leaves, making me jump. Then all was quiet. The snapping o a branch made me swing me flashlight around.

"Who's there?" I was met with more silence. I heard footsteps.

"What's going on?" I whispered. Suddenly I got my legs kicked out from under me. I looked up, partially blinded by the bright torch now shining in my face. I saw a man with a bushy face. I whimpered, terrified.

"Lights out," he grinned. The last thing I saw was a baseball bat heading towards me. Then there was blackness.

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