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I am sorry to say that's the only nice thing about this chapter, because this touches my weak spot: Emotions.
Now, I am no robot. I have feelings, but like many other people I have trouble writing them. It's harder than one may think, okay?
I'll explain to the Romance writers and the psichologists out there. Let's say writing is like Middle Earth. Writing to me, is as beautiful as the land of the elves *Listen, reading the books was hard enough, I won't remember all the names*, and explaining feelings is... Mordor.
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Thanks for explaining, you... (What was his name?!?)... M'friend... The dear... You. Yeah, that's what I meant to say.
Now, for us the emotionless writing people, as scary and fiery as Mordor may look, I don't want to use the psychologist's card so I will put it another way: Deal with it.
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I'm really into the Lord of the Rings references today. I apologize.
Anyways, what I was saying is that it is hard, it is complicated... Yeah, we know, but we MUST DEAL WITH IT. Just go, try and fail. Try again, and again, and again... The eagles won't be there to save you again, I must warn you! You keep going. Sorry.
For the little emotional ones that are just laughing and pointing, here's a little thing: To leave a little piece of soul in your characters does not mean you are good with emotions. So yeah. Deal with that, too.
The answer:
I can't just spread a magic posion and some fancy words. You have to deal with your emotionless writing, sadly. It is a journey one must face alone.
My tip to you, is to relate your character's situation... How would you feel? If you are as emotionless as you write, just imagine how your mother or a woman would respond. (I know, sorry... I don't want to generalize all women, but I just want eveyrone to know it's just a joke. I don't want to offend women, especially since I'm one m'self. I will just laugh at my own joke now and move on).
It's hard, yes. All I can do is give you a hug and wish you a nice trip.
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