Sliding bookmark to separate chapters updated to Draft 3 from the rougher Draft 2.5 (unlabeled in titles) and Draft 2 (labeled in titles) chapters.
Current goals:
Chapters 8-14 scene re-ordering, rewriting for flow/pace and contniunity, and editing for style
Chapters 15-20 rewriting and editing for continuity and style
Chapters 21-23 rewriting and editing for continuity and style
Chapter 24-? posting, rewriting for continuity, and editing for style
Chapter "26"-"31" renumbering as chapters following 24 fill-in a narrative gap, rewriting for continuity and style.
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The Empty World | The Empty World Sequence [complete | rewriting]
FantasyThe Empty World is a 200K word darkly whimsical Fantasy novel, in the supernatural-protagonist tradition of The Sandman or The Vampire Chronicles, about a young daimon who watches over a muse after 'saving' her with a bottle of vampire blood and how...