Breaking Point

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Sliding bookmark to separate chapters updated to Draft 3 from the rougher Draft 2.5 (unlabeled in titles) and Draft 2 (labeled in titles) chapters.


Current goals:

Chapters 8-14  scene re-ordering, rewriting for flow/pace and contniunity, and editing for style

Chapters 15-20 rewriting and editing for continuity and style

Chapters 21-23 rewriting and editing for continuity and style

Chapter 24-? posting, rewriting for continuity, and editing for style

Chapter "26"-"31" renumbering as chapters following 24 fill-in a narrative gap, rewriting for continuity and style.

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