Mermaids!!! Very unique. It was very enjoyable and different in a good way. I loved the detail and the way you described the beach. Honestly the only thing I would say is to describe your characters throughout the story instead of giving them bio you should reveal how they are through their action and dialog. I like the beginning of your story it wasn't boring at all it was very well written. Nice job:) so if your not the author and your reading this go check it out.
-Divergent_lover4646
