Review - R03FB

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Oh my gosh I am extremely sorry, this took so much more time, I'm awful human being with no time management at all!

Review for @trivialpotter  (I hope I got it right!)

Forgetting Billions

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•] One thing I have to say, the details were perfect! It was the perfect combination of descriptive and not-boring-like-my-chemisty-textbook!

•] The characters are very unique, and distinguished which makes it even more exciting to read!

•] The summary was really catchy and didn't give away any major spoilers, which is very hard to achieve! 

•] I honestly couldn't find any flaws, like punctuation and grammar and everything was perfect!

•] Just one small thing that can be fixed, spacing. I'm not sure if Wattpad was glitching or it was the format or something, but the spacing was uneven and sometimes the paragraphs didn't break, just fix that (if it isn't McGlitch Wattpad) and you're set!

•] The way the characters thoughts and ideas were portrayed was really good!

Overall, it was amazing and I loved it! 

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Payment: One honest comment on my book 'Tales of A Jinx Breaker'.

Thank you for requesting!

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