HaveSomeShawarma

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Something to note before I send: My character is a literal self-insert because I've been using her since before I can remember (Probably 3-5 y.o.) and I can't change her now. [aye I'm not telling you to change her I'm just saying that every character needs work.]
Full Name: Can't tell you 'cause it's my name. I assure you it's a perfectly normal name. Nothing like Ebony or Aphrodite. [right.]
Age: 29 [not normal, I like it.]
Human?: Yep. [go u]
Hair Color: Darkish blonde [meh ok as long as it's darkish blonde bc all I find is "light platinum champagne" and it's kinda like 'shut up its fricking blonde']
Hair Length: Short because they cut it that way at a mental asylum. She prefers it to her back, thank you very much. [whoa back is long. short hair does nicely.]
Eye Color: Hazel [yay]
Other Facial Features: Nothing to note [kk]
Body Description: Tall, muscular enough to fight well [you can fight well without being muscular.]
Personality: Bold, impulsive, slightly annoying, rebellious, upbeat [well there's something called *clears throat* NOTALLFEMALECHARACTERSHAVETOBEREDUCEDTOKICKINGASS]
Strengths: Brave, stronger, faster, and more agile than most people, not quite superhuman. [Hmmm.]
Weaknesses: Insanity, impulsiveness, severe social anxiety, annoyingness [insanity is a bit far from personality, and severe social anxiety yet upbeat and impulsive? What does she do, have a panic attack when she's trying to be the ambassador of earth?]
Likes: YouTube, Star Wars, Lord of the Rings, Frozen (This is a big part of the annoyingness I was talking about), looking cool, being a vigilante [those last two are just no.]
Dislikes: Crowds, insane asylums, betrayal [okaaay.]
Crush: Also a real person's name
Boyfriend: same guy
Crushing on her: same guy
FF info: Marvel Cinematic Universe, DC Universe (To an extent), Spider-Man [mmkay sounds interesting.]
History: Normal life until there was some sort of nuclear accident *Insert science* Then it got weird and stayed weird and she lost her mind and joined The Avengers. [riiiight. sounds a bit plotholey, but it's not my place to judge... wait! It is!]
Other Info: She's a superhero. She told everyone in the world that she's Batman's daughter and Batman is supposed to be dead (Though he's not) so he can't tell them otherwise. She's been riding on this popularity for a while now. [dayum nice moves there]

A few aspects of the character's personality don't quite fit, but I got the gist. Your character is about 33% Mary Sue.

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