The Ultimate Mary Sue Test [CLOSED]

dauntlessdemigod

name - Felicity Banks [hmm. like the name. bit overdone.]
age - 17 species - mage (like magical person, it's a long story ok maybe not) [magiccc. s'pose that's alright.]
hair colour - brown... [brown hair unite!]
eye colour - green [ok]
other facial features - um.. she has normal sized eyebrows and a small nose? [kk]
body description - pretty average for a 17 year old, she's a little tall like most Mages are. [depends on your definition of average.]
personality - pretty funny, i guess she's nice and outgoing too [sounds solid, although what is a character without a dark side?]
strengths - sword fighting and reasoning [smart too. hm.]
weaknesses - after a while, she gets impatient. also, she doesn't have her power yet [hmm patience is a virtue.]
likes - reading and training for most things. she likes to have her mind off of everything, so she always is doing something [mind off what, exactly? you have to know your character' sinner struggles.]
dislikes - people who are attention hogs, when someone tries to hurt someone she cares about [hmm.]
crush - doesn't really have one (she might later on, but probably not) [do not ruin her with romance!!!!]
bf/gf - nope
people crushing on her - none she's just friends with everyone
fanfic info - she's a mage, it's a fanfic of the Prophesized Series by kaitlyn Hoyt [i should read it!]
history - she grew up, not really knowing her parents and living with her two best friends, Emma & Theo. [a Mage living with her bffs? seems legit.]
other facts- i think that's pretty much the basics of Fel -Steph :)

Your character is brilliant! I think you need to understand her some more though. She is 27% Mary Sue!