My example.
Full Name: Raine Marigold Annabelle Aphrodite Evans.
]Already, the name is a problem. Long, exotic names with stuff like "Aphrodite" is your first hint to a Mary Sue.[
Age: She is sixteen.
]Typical Mary Sue age.[
Human? Any vampire, werewolf, etc.?: She is an immortal, the goddess of hair-stylists.
]She can't be both immortal and sixteen. Goddess? That's a Mary Sue sure. And of hair-stylists...[
Hair colour: Really dark brown, like chocolate.
Hair length: Long, to her butt.
]Mary Sue again![
Eye colour: Her eyes are a bright, dazzling silver.
]Oh hell no. I'll settle for a strange shade of hazel, or a murky green, but not silver. No one has silver eyes. This one's definitely turning out to be a Mary Sue.[
Other facial features: Really pale really unnatural.
Body description (petite, etc.): She is small and flat-chested.
Personality: Raine is very loving and caring. She has that sort of personality where's she's bubbly and bright, but with a pinch of flirtatiousness and a whole lot of sexiness. She is really sweet and adorably awesome. She's really smart and really brainy.
]Can I just say... WARNING! MARY SUE AHEAD![
Strengths: Doing makeup and hair, being a fashion designer, playing sports.
Weaknesses: She's afraid of water.
Likes: Fires, and hair, and sports!
]>.<[
Dislikes: Mean popular goddesses, goddesses stealing away the hottest god.
]Its not high school...[
Crush: Jupiter, Neptune, Pluto!!
]So now she's Roman... and crushing on three people? Mary Sue.[
Boyfriend/Girlfriend: Tragically, none.
People crushing on her: Jupiter, Neptune, Pluto, Mars, Vulcan... etc. all the gods.
]>.- I'm ashamed.[
Fanfiction Info: N/A
History: She grew up a goddess, Aphrodite's twin sister!
]*hurls into nearby trash can* So now she's Greek...[
Other facts: N/A
That was torturous for me to write... but a lame example of a Mary Sue. So there you have it.
BINABASA MO ANG
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