Sukor- Love has no barriers (editing)

Sukor - new feelings

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Recap; Sukor had a moment of love n the kids were teasing them.
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Scene 1

Sujor aur baache gaon wapis gaye. Raju; Suraj bhai kiya aapke paas koi qand hai? Suraj; kiya? Paakhi; uffo woh meethi meethi khane ki choti si...
Suraj; oh sweets... Baache; haan haan wohi. Suraj; theek he main abhi dehkta hoon. Suraj ne apni jaibein dehki lehkin kuch nahi mila. Baachon nahi hai ☹. Chakor; par tum log Suraj se qand kyun mangrahe hoo?
Raju; kyunki hum logon ne tum dono ko bachaiya gundon se. Koi inaam to milna chaye. Chakor; ohh tum apne doost ko bachane kilye bhi inaam logo. Bhit hi buri baat hai. Suraj apne haath se Raju ke balon se gaye. Yeh to mera chota bhai hai. Agar is he mithai chate to phir deni to paregi. Baachon ki muskurahat aah bheti. Chakor; woh hume bhi chaye mithai. Suraj; aapko bhi chaye mithai... Chakor; haan 😊

Sukor n the kids were back at the village. Raju; Suraj Bro. Do u have some qand? Suraj; what? Paakhi; uffo it's small n very very sweet to eat... Suraj; oh Candy. The kids; ya 😊. Suraj; ok let me check. He checked his pockets but found nothjng. Sorry I Don't have. Chakor; y u asked for candys? Raju; bcz we saved u we should get some reward. Chakor; u r asking for reward for saving friends that's mean. ☹. Suraj go through Raju's hair. Hi is my little bro if he wants sweets we will get him some. The kids were smiling bright. Chakor; even I want sweets. Suraj; even u want sweets in a naughty way. Chakor; ya 😊.

They went to a candyshop 😊.
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Scene 2

Baache Suraj ko kheej ke legaye mithai ki dukaan pe aur Chakor unke peeche peeche arahi thi. Suraj; dheere yaar. Suraj apne peeche dehk rahta Chakor ka masoom sa chehra par uska dehaan gumsum sa tha. Suraj - hmm kiya howa isse? -. Paakhi; Suraj bhai yeh lo agaye yahan se jitni bhi mithai humare liye khareedne he khareedlo. Dukaanwala; Are Paakhi. Oh Bablu, Raju aur Munni bhi kiya khichri pakaraheho? Bablu; kuch bhi nahi. Dukaanwala; yeh koun hai?. Munni; yeh Suraj bhai hain haveli se. Dukaanwala; Haveli se hai. Woh apna chehra badal bheta khushi se ghusse main. Suraj; maaf karna. Woh apna saar neechaye kar bheta. Lagta hai hum yahan par koi nahi jhata hai. Dukaanwala; sahi bolo, koi bhi tumhe yahan nahi jhata. Raju; kiya kehrahe ho. Yeh bhot hi aache hain. Dukaanwala; yeh aur aache? kabhi nahi. Yeh un main se ek hain. Raju; yeh humare bhai hain. Aur unnoneh humse waada kiya hai. Ke aaj ke baat kuch bura nahi hoga humare saath. Hain nah?. Suraj apna saar hila bheta. Haan Maine waada kiya hai aur main apne waade nihbahta hoon.

The kids pull Suraj to the candyshop n Chakor was following them. Suraj; slow yaar he looked back n saw her innocent face he smiled at her but she  was lost in her thoughts. Suraj - hmm what's wrong with her? -. Paakhi; Suraj bro here u can buy us all the sweets. The shopkeeper; Oh hey Paakhi. Oh Raju, Bablu n Munni what's cooking in ur mind. Bablu; nothing. The shopkeeper; who is this? Munni; Suraj bro. from the mansion. The shopkeeper; from the mansion he changed his face from happy to angry. Suraj; sorry he lowered his head. I think I'm not welcomed here. The shopkeeper; u r right. U r not welcomed. Raju; what r u saying? he is a gud guy. The shopkeeper; he can't be gud he is one if them. Raju; he is our brother n he promised us nothing wrong will happen to us anymore. Right?. Suraj nod. It's a promise n I keep my promises.

Guess who could be the shopkeeper?
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Scene 3

Dukaanwala; Chakor tumbhi aaye ho? Chup kyun rahi ho?. Chakor uper dehk bheti aur hosh main agayi thi. Chakor muskurah bheti aur woh muskurahat Suraj ko ek ajeeb sa dard dehbheta. Aur woh bhi dil main chota par bhot hi gehra sa. Chakor; haan main hoon. Dukaanwala; mithai chaye hai. Chakor haan. Suraj Babu hume bhi khareed ke denge hain na 😄? Suraj sar se haan kar bheta. Par mujhe lagta hai ke yeh Dukaanwala mujhe apni mithai bechna nahi jahte. Chakor; kyun😯? Suraj; kyonki hum haveliwale hain. Chakor; kiya!😡😝.
Hume kuch nahi chaheye tumse. Chalo yahaase jo humare doost ko izaat nadeh hum uske doost nahi rehsakte. Suraj; yeh kiya kehrahi hoo. Chakor Suraj ko haath parke apne paas khench bheti. Chakor; hum jarahe hain. Suraj ka dard jo phele tha woh mitgaya. Aab uska dil teezi say dharakne laga aur woh andhar hi andhar khushiyon ke mare uchalraha tha. Baache; nahi... Dukaanwala; Uffo Chakor tumbhi na. Theek hai behchenge inko bhi qand aur mithai. Chakor 😁 mujhe pata tha 😉. Suraj ne khareedi saab ke liye mithai.

The shopkeeper; Chakor is it u? y r u hidding?. Chakor looked up back in here n now. She smiled n this smile gave Suraj a pain in his heart. A short but deep pain. Chakor; yaa it's me.  The shopkeeper; do u want some sweets? Chakor; ya well Suraj Babu will buy us right? 😄. Suraj nod hmm I would like to but the shopkeeper doesn't want to sell me. Chakor; y? 😯. Suraj; bcz I'm one from the mansion. Chakor; what! 😡😝 We don't want anything from u. Let's go if u don't treat my friend with respect I won't be ur friend anymore. Suraj; Chakor what r u saying? Chakor took Suraj hand n pulls him toward her.  Chakor; we r going. Suraj pain vanished his heart was beating faster n his inner one was jumping high. The kids; no... The shopkeeper; uff Chakor it's ok I will sell him some candys. Chakor 😁 I knew u would 😉. Suraj bought them all sweets.

They were all going to place to sit.
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Scene 4

Paakhi; aapko kaise pata tha?
Chakor; kiya? Bablu; ke Dukaanwala manjenge inko mithai beehchne keliye. Chakor; acha woh. Bas aise hi.
Munni ne Suraj haath pakar ke rahka tha aur apne dusre haath main chocolate thi. Woh uchalraji thi

Ek gaonwala unko rohk bheta. Suraj; kiya huwa? hume rohka kyun?. Goanwala; yeh baache inhe kaam karna hai khelna nahi hai. Suraj; abhe Tu hai koun?. Chakor Suraj ko leh bheti. Suraj; kiya?. Chakor; yeh... woh bhot ghabragayi thi. Suraj; are kiya huwa?... Aramse batao. Chakor; yeh bhot hi bure hain. Inka naam Shikhu hai aur woh gunday hain aapke papa keliye kaam karte hain. Suraj; aacha papa keliye kaam karte hain... theek hai shukriya. Chakor heran hogay Suraj ke jawab se par woh aage nahi pooch bheti.

Suraj; yeh baache aur jobhi baachen hain woh aaj ke baat kaam nahi karenge. Shikhu; tum koun hoteho yeh faisla deneko. Suraj; tumhare saab ke bete hain. jah ke poochlo. Shikhu; Teri to! woh araha tha Suraj par waar karne. Lekin Suraj usse kahin ziyaada teez aur taqaatwar tha. Suraj ne Shikhu ko khub pita.Suraj ne Shikhu ko phirse samjhaya ke nah wo usse ya baachon se panga le aur nahi woh ainda Chakor ke kareeb aye.

Paakhi; how could u know?
Chakor; what? Bablu; that the shopkeeper will agree to sell him sweets. Chakor; oh that. Just like that. Munni was holding Suraj hand n  chocolate on her other hand she was hopping.

A villager stop them. Suraj; what happen? y u stop us?. The man; these kids they have to work n not play. Suraj; who the hell r u?. Chakor took Suraj aside. Suraj; what?. Chakor; he is... she was very scared. Suraj; hey relax... tell me. Chakor; he is very bad his name is Shikhu n he is a goon he works for ur father. Suraj; he works for my father... ok gud thx. Chakor was confused abt Suraj answer but she didn't asked further.

Suraj; these kids or any other kids won't work here ever again. Shikhu; who the hell r u to take this decision. Suraj; ur boss son. Go ask him who I am. Shikhu; how dare u! He was coming to attack Suraj but our Suraj is faster n better he beats Shikhu n explained him again not to mess with him or the kids. N he should stay away from Chakor.

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Last scene

Baache aur Chakor dehkte hi rehgaye kitna Shikhu ko pitrahatha. Baache toh bhit hi khush the aur garv mehsoos karrahe the ke koi aise inke saath bhi hai. Chakor - woh humare liye bhi lar bheta. Woh bhi is Shikhu se jo hunare saath bure kaam karna jhata tha. Pehle to koi bhi meri fiqaar nahi karta tha par yeh karte hain, kyun? -. Suraj khara hogaya. Chalo. Baache haan kar bheten lehkin Chakor kahrirehgayi unke samne.
Suraj; Chakor kiya huwa? Chakor uske gale laggayi. Pora gaun jagra dehk bheta aur aab Chakor ko. Suraj; aab saab theek hogaya. Ainda woh tumhe pareshan nahi karega. Chakor haan kar bheti aur woh wahan se chalegaye. Lekin gaon wale peech peche baat karne laggaye.

The kids n Chakor were shocked how much he beats Shikhu. The kids were happy n proud to have someone like him. Chakor - he fight for me too with this Shikhu who had tried bad things with me. No1 cared for me before but he does, y? -. Suraj stood up n walked to them. Let's go. The kids just nod n Chakor was standing in front of them. Suraj; Chakor what?. Chakor hugged him. The whole village had seen the fight n now this hug. Suraj; Chakor it's ok. He won't harass u again. Chakor nod n they went from there. The village starts gossiping...

Oh my I hope its ok 😊