Sukor- Love has no barriers (editing)

Sukor - a night

Hi thank u all I really mean it for ur patience with my story work exhausted me 😣.

Recap; Sukor confessed that theg can't live without each other. They decided to stay the night at the cottage.

Suraj woke up he couldn't sleep n Chakor too was awake. Suraj turned to see her face n wad surprise as she was looking at him.

Suraj; Kiya huwa Chakor neend nahi arahi? {what happen Chakor can't u sleep?}

Chakor nod. Suraj thought a bit of the situation.

Suraj; Chakor daar to nahi lagraha hai? {r u scared?}.

Chakor; nahi to hum aap per pura bharosa hai {no not at all I trust u fullest}.

Suraj; thank u.
Chakor; hmm velkom 😁.
Suraj; welcome... 😊
Chakor; wohi {exactly} 😀
Suraj; ek din tum sihklogi aur phir... {one day u will learn it n then...}
Chakor; maine nahi bolungi 😋 {I won't say it}.
Suraj; kyun kiya jo maine kaha tha mushkil tha {y was it hard what I said to u}?
Chakor; nahi {no}.
Suraj; phir?{then?}
Chakor; aapko maine bata to diya...😶
{I already told u}.

Suraj took her n hugged her tight.
Suraj; mere hi lafzon main khedo. {say ut in my words}.
Chakor; dehkte hain {let's see}.

Suraj n Chakor looses the hug n were looking around the old cottage. Suraj - Where will we sleep now... This old  mattress awful to sleep on -.

Chakor; kiya huwa? {what happen?}
Suraj; mujhe is hmm... mattress.
Chakor was looking at him with question marks on her face.
Suraj; ek min. Yeh mattress hai.
Chakor; acha gadda...
Suraj; was angry. Tumne mujhe gadda kaha. {u called me donkey} 😤.
Chakor; hahaha. Nahi. {no}
Suraj; tumne gadda kaha maine sunna { U said donkey I heard it}
Chakor; haan gadda nahi ke gadha.
(yeah I said mattress not donkey}
Suraj; kiya dono eki tharase bole jahte hain? {is the writing of the words same}. Chakor nod.

Chakor; par ek farq hai. {there is one difference}. She spelled bith words carefully. Suraj; ok tho phir theek hai {oh ok then it's fine}.

Chakor smiled n looked at him in her  dreamy way. Suraj waves with the hand in front of her but she was gone.  Suraj comes closer n no reaction of Chakor. Suraj hmm🤔.😎😙 he kisses her nose.

Chakor; Suraj...
Suraj 😜.
Chakor; aap... aap soojaye. {u.. u go sleep}.
Suraj; kahan?{where?}
Chakor; Wohan {there} she showed to a corner of the cottage which was in the backside n fully dry.
Suraj; haan theek hai magar tum kahan soohgi? {yeah that's fine but where will u sleep?}
Chakor; yahan is gadda pe {here on that mattress}
Suraj; saaach 😣 mujhse dour. Raat main sardi lagegi to? {really? away from me. If it will get cold in the late night?}.
Chakor; kuch nahi hoga {nothing will happen}. Soojao. {sleep}.

Suraj nid n went to his corner. It was dry but cold. Suraj looked around if he could find something to cover him like a blanket but unfortunately the quilt he foubd was wet of the rain. He lied down on the cold floor n after a while he starts to shake bcz of the cold.

Chakor on the otherside of the cottage was sleeping she was used to it to sleep on an old n dirty mattress. In her sleep she was getting nervous something in her heart wasn't giving her peace a restlessness starts to increase. Chakor suddenly woke up shouting Suraj!!!.

Suraj was freezing his body temperature was decreasing Chakor walked to him to check on him. Chakor was relieved seeing him but staring at him for while made her realise that something is wrong with him.

Chakor stepped forward slowly not to wake him. She was on her knees holding his shoulder she made hom turn. Chakor got scared she first checked her forehead n his forehead temperature by putting her head on his. Bjt she couldn't feel it right then she remembers what Teju once told her not head to head but hand on head.

Chakor placed one hand on her n the other hand on his forehead. Chakor felt the warmth temperature from her n from him a cold one.

Chakor; Suraj! she was scared unknown what to do she starts crying. Chakor; Suraj... Suraj uttho {wake up} she was shaking him but he was in a comatose situation.

Chakor was thinking what to do as he was freezing her only way to help him was to bring his body temperature back.

Chakor; Suraj fiqar nahi karo hum abhi aate hain {Don't worry Suraj I'm jsut coming}.

She sniffs n got up she looked for wood she could use but the rain had just stopped n everything was still too wet to burn.

Chakor; aab hum kiya karenge? {what will I do now?}

She cried again she closed her eye's just to see a memory.

FB of young Chakor [full English]

.... An image... Chakor was thinking who is she? The imagine of a... hmm who's shape is this...? A woman appear. Chakor was lost maai.

Kasturi; aarree look at my Chakoriya u played long in the rain now u caught a cold. Don't worry mama is here to take care of u.
....

Well ur mama is not alone to care of our little angel... Chakor whom's  voice is this?... A man appear. Chakor cries Baapu.
....

A little girl Chakor was freezing n lying on the old mattress she was shaking like Suraj is. Her mother took a blanket to cover her.

Kasturi; Chakoriya ka papa make some fire. Bhuvaan; Ya I'm on it.

He went to backside of the cottage there was a small hole where he hides woodstick's. He got them in n placed them on a safety place in the middle of the room he had stones placed in a circle. Now he was rubbing the sticks with each other n ut starts to glow.

Bhuvaan; now my doll has some fire. Kasturi; her temperature is not recovering...
Bhuvaan; I think u should lie next to her to give ur body heat. Kasturi nod n lied next to little Chakor... The heat was still feel able. 

Chakor opens her eye's screaming loud!

FB ends.

Chakor runs out to the backside n found dry sticks sge placed them correctly not to harm her or Suraj. She was niw rubbing the sticks she did it for while when it finally worked. The blanket was wet she found on the ground she thought... where could be something to cover...?

Chakor unexplainable webt into the kitchen it was obviously destroyed but there was an old cloth she took it n covers Sursj with it. Chakor rubs his leg to give him some heat. A small movement of Suraj he opens hus eyes.

Suraj with lot of effort. Ch..Cha... Chakor. He was still freezing u could hear the shaking of his teeth.

Chakor; Suraj shukhar aapko hosh agaya {Thank Gid u gain ur conscious}.

Suraj; mujhe bh...bhot sa...sard..i lag...rahi hai. {I'm feeling very cold}.

Chakor; hum abhi kuch karte hain {I will do something}.

Chakor turned him she put all her strength together n pulled him to the fire but very carefully.

Chakor; aab kaisa lagraha hai? {How h feel now?}

Suraj; behtar hai {it's better}.

Chakor was again rubbing his feets Suraj was now rolled in the blanket but still shaking.

Chakor; Suraj....
She hugs him his uncontrolled breath was back n was stabilising.

Chakor - Jism ki gharmi {Body heat} -.
Chakor; yehi ek raasta hai {it's the only way}.
Suraj; Kiya bolrahi ho? {what r u saying?}.

Chakor made him lie rightly she opens one corner of the cloth n comes in next to Suraj. Chakor put her arms on Suraj she caresses/rubs his body with her hands. She gaves him her body heat he took it n hugged her tight.

This time both felt asleep in woke up on the other day.

😆 I will tell u a funny thing on the next update