you painted in blue
and spoke in yellow
but I couldn't even paint
and I spoke in grey
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This was supposed to be dramatic and about not feeling good enough but every time I read it I laugh a lot so yeah.
🍋also may I add that I started this book with the intention of just getting a couple of improvements then un publishing my work. But we just hit 700 reads!!! And I know that might sound minuscule in comparison to other books who have millions, but it makes me happy to know that at least like 10 of you have to like me right?
anyway thank you so much and don't forget,
be brutal in the comments- I still need the improvement!
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an honest mess with potential
Poetryhighest ranking #2 (13.11.18) a collection of stories i'll never complete, poetry that's second place material, fantasies that will never come true and a bunch of other mediocre things. I wrote this at like 14 or something so please don't the judge...
