Tanhaiyan-shraman version

shraman's affection towards each other [chapter 1 contd.] {EDITED}

EDITED

recap-more of shravan and suman [chapter 1 contd.]

after  1-2 hours in preeti's room

Sumo-oye my pretty preeti!!..kya kar rahi??come sit here and mujhe charcoal pack lagane de .....You know bride's glow!!...woh toh har rozz dikhna zaroori hai na??

Preeti-fine meri maa....Aaj lagale aur karle jo karna hai after all its a usual evening party you see!!

Naira-hey bhagwan tum dono bhi na!!...just get ready aur sumo tum na multani mitti lagao usey ....charcoal pack nahi samjhi!!

Anaya-just don't even listen to her sumo!!...tum issey charcoal pack hi lagao

Sumo-fine come on let's get ready

In evening party

Shravan sees sumo coming down with a black gown. He messages her

Shravan-you look absolutely____and stunning in this!!

Sumo(sees the message)-absolutely what??..complete it!!

Shravan-hot!!

Sumo-hot??

Shravan-you look absolutely hot in this dress!!

Sumo-now you forgot stunning!!

Shravan-miss suman,you look absolutely hot and stunning in this dress!!

Sumo-thanks☻♥

Shravan-toh miss suman kya aap mere saath yeh iss raat ko enjoy karna pasand karengi??

Sumo-kyun nahi Mr.....

Shravan-shravan malhotra....mera poora naam

Suman-suman tiwari...mera poora naam aur dost mujhe sumo bulate hain

Shravan-toh main aapko kya bulaaun

Suman-kuch bhi

Shravan-so to decide that miss suman tiwari meet me after 1 hour sharp on rooftop I'll be waiting

Sumo sees the message and turns to find shravan. She finds him busy with his friends.
Shravan feels a gaze on him and turns around to see sumo staring at him. He winks with a smile
Sumo smiles

TO BE CONTINUED..........................................................................................................

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