Deleted scenes ft. Fighting Gold!

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So I had a lot of fun writing this! My story is being received well and I'm so happy that I was able to create something that you guys would enjoy. And I can't say it enough:

Thank you all for your continued support!

Now, without further ado, I present you all the ideas I had come up with for the story that I threw in the trash!

- One of my very first ideas for this story was to have the reader befriend the Jotaro Fan Club founders (similar to the story) but later become close enough with the founders and other members that she would become the President of the fan club! I always imagined her doing this to piss off Jotaro. Having her become the leader of those pack of wolves is probably a nightmare for him.

- The reader of this story was made to be headstrong and the epitome of a 'Moral Compass', but that wasn't always her intended personality. I really wanted to play with a delinquent who had strong protective instincts for the rest of the delinquents in her group. Jotaro would have pissed her off by hurting one of the members and the story would have revolved around the "Bad girl Bad guy" troupe where they both just kick ass.

- Jotaro doesn't have many lines in here but I had originally drafted a conversation between him and the reader where they discussed Jotaro's love for cowboy movies and how terribly cheesy he sounded repeating the lines of his favorite western film.

- I also drafted a scene where Holly busts out the old photo albums and shows the reader a ton of embarrassing pictures and telling the stories behind them. Jotaro was sitting in the corner interjecting ever so often and complaining about how annoying his mother was being. We all would have loved to see this lol.

-When Jotaro returned to Japan, he and the reader went into an intense week-long studying session where the reader brings him all the work he needed to catch up on while teaching him the material of the class. Any wrong answers resulted in 20 push-ups with the reader sitting on his back, reading more details about wars from long ago.

- The reader was once intimidated by Holly and was even scared to ask if she thought she would be a good wife or not. It's only once she reveals that Jotaro probably likes her because of how similar they are in the sense that they are very traditional women with pride in their families that she starts to feel more confident and asks for Holly's blessing.

- Mr. and Mrs. Zeppeli were going to make an appearance. Mr.Zeppeli would be all over Jotaro and even offered her hand in marriage on the spot, much to your displeasure. Mrs. Zeppeli was so happy to see both of you and bombarded you with questions of when the grandchildren will start popping out. You could only tell her how embarrassing they were and how they could expect grandchildren when y'all where still in Highschool.

- You elbow Jotaro in the stomach when he replies "I've been trying."

-I deleted many scenes where the reader would insult Jotaro's masculinity and the poor boy would get triggered. There was a scene where the reader was hurt and Jotaro was made to clean and dress her wounds and she comments on how she never thought such a big man like Jotaro would have a woman's touch.

- He then threatens to treat your wounds with a dirty needle in hopes you'll get an infection.

- Jotaro hated meeting Yuki, Miluki, and Fumiyuki. They all swarmed you with questions and mentioned how jealous they are that YOU got Jotaro Kujo. You all remained friends through high school but Jotaro did try to steer you away from the trio in favor of some much needed alone time. 

- This one a bit angsty but; I don't see Jotaro ever coming home from Egypt unscared. There would be nights where he would have terrible nightmares of losing Kakyoin, Avdol, and Iggy and sometimes even you would be the one lying lifeless on the streets of Cairo. You are always there to help him and spend many nights holding him tight so he is rooted in reality. You weren't leaving him anytime soon. He would also just generally be panicked and often comments on how he feels like you guys are being watched or how you shouldn't head out and about alone since he isn't there to protect you if any of Dio's remnants attack you. You are very patient and assuring him that there's nothing getting in the way of your life together.

- I also imagine that when you guys are picking a name after you find out you are pregnant, you and Jotaro argue on whether Jolyne would be just Jolyne Kujo or Jolyne Kujo-Zeppeli (or Jolyne Zeppeli-Kujo). You were proud of your family and still wanted to pass on the name but you both eventually settle on just Jolyne Kujo because he convinces you that you are a Joestar now and since you took his name it didn't make any sense to tack on 'Zeppeli' to his daughter's name.

That's pretty much it for this nice bonus. I hope you all enjoyed.

Now for the real announcement:


Fighting Gold, a Giorno insert, will be up in just a couple of minutes! Come check it out...If you DARE.

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