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Plot Holes
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• Illogical Events
• Contradictions
• Dropped Plot Lines or Characters
• Unexplained Changes in Character or SettingInessentials
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• Unnecessary Scenes
• Clichés
• Repetition
• RedundanciesPacing
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Raising Riven
RomanceDeclan Scott, a failing architect running circles in New York, stumbles across an abandoned child at Teardrop Park. In his fight to adopt and raise Riven, he must face the uncertainties of his career, fatherhood, and a budding romance involving his...