achilles was a god, a god among men
he was effortlessly kind and sweet, a perfect ten
achilles wore a helmet made of the finest gold
but if he battled the trojan man hector, he'd lose his soul
he led the attack on troy, the nicest general you've met
his lover patroclus and the soldiers agreed, too much would he fret
he was paranoid, a frenzied young adult
many people in the war died, and achilles believed he was at fault
he began to go mad, his mind falling apart
after patroclus died, his world was no longer a piece of art
he was a turbulent sea, stormy and fierce
but never once did his fellow generals also pierce
it was rough and venomous, how he'd move
but what was the now mid twenties boy trying to prove?
he'd scream and holler, all throughout the night
it'd cause everyone, not just the trojans, a major fright
he was bitter and sour, a truly changed boy
to him, love and happiness was a trojan ploy
he cried and screamed day after day
and all the killing seemed like a fun game to play
he lost his control, it was dead and gone
and over patroclus' dead body he'd fawn
achilles was immature and destructive, a mess among men
he was effortlessly cruel, and his honor he didn't care to defend
after a hit to his heel, and a stab to a man
the hero achilles was buried in the trojan sand.
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