Seriously
Stop reading
I'm pretty sure the story doesn't even make sense and I'm only at like 5 chapters
I added too much detail I think
I also think I got into the drama too quickly?
Maybe Im not good at explaining things?
Maybe I brought on secrets too quickly?
This is what happens when you don't get feedback😂 you start doubting yourself
Read it if you want
But beware it probably sucks
Tell me if it does and what I can fix
Let me know if you like it or what you'd like to happen next.
Who do you ship who do you not?
Is there a traitor?
Am I prolonging the drama(chapters/book) too much?
Are the chapters too long?
I NEED FEEDBACK TO WRITE A STORY
HELP ME
please?
YOU ARE READING
Feared
Teen FictionRain Deadlock the girl everyone fears, raised in the Black Rose gang, the best at everything. Hunter White the leader of the Dark Angels, He wants Rain but will he hurt her in the process of getting her?
