Rewrite... NVM

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I just realized how terrible that chapter was and I'm gonna go ahead and fix it up by starting from a different point, a different view, maybe a switch up of the cast then originally planned.

I apologize in advance and hope that the newer model of this idea is more to all of your pleasing. I dunno if y'all want more characters that are part of the canon or more OCs. But let me know and I will try to fix this.

With all due respect and my sincerest apologies


HEYO!!!!
Gonna be back at it again. Slight rewrite. But expect a chapter....
Soon?

Seeya
PervySage

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