Hi I'm going to rework on the story entirely. I feel the pace very slow and too long so I'm going back to it with some major changes. Thanks for those who took the time read and that vote.
I'm going be unpublished the work unless anyone rather have it this unfinished version still up.
I also know when I respond I do sound very agressive when I comment I do try to tone it down and do not want to sound rude at anytime.
My sincere apologies!
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The curve of gamble (Tasia, the Avalanche)
Teen FictionAnother sister and brothers, I nearly read 200 books about that bond so I do know a thing or two. I'm putting my own twists on ideas. Enjoy! ********** Ava is skilled to be a silent one, one who observed and didn't say anything about what she saw...