IMPORTANT QUESTION

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Hello everyone! Sorry I'm not updating this book much because Covid 19 and quarantine thing. But I have a question.

Should I change the POV of the reader? Cause I noticed something on my other books. And I feel I had less votes on these book besides my first 2 books. Look at these from one of my books: THE HYBRID

 Look at these from one of my books: THE HYBRID

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Instead of Y/N, I used the word "you". That chapter has 20+ votes.

And this image is from the SILVER EYED FREELANCER, again, I used the word "you" instead of Y/N

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And this image is from the SILVER EYED FREELANCER, again, I used the word "you" instead of Y/N. And this has 25+ votes.

Now my question is, should I change the reader's POV like on those images? To help the reader understand the chapter? I need your answers in the comment section below!

-Raizer out!

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