Okay I feel bad about unpublishing since you guys like it (explain why because I don't get it 😂) and I'm providing options. If you don't comment you don't care and it means you're totally cool with option 1, and if yoh comments then state the number and why. I need that feedback so I know as many other perspectives I can get.
1.) unpublish. Again I don't like this work. I don't like how many of the plotlines came out especially the a w k w a r d ones. The character development fell very flat and the dialogue is so cringey. Plus my old writing style is gross but you can see it change toward the end.
2.) do some edits. This would include cutting out A LOT. Some of the bullying would be cut, that thing with that one drawing would be cut, the awkward sex stuff, all of that shit. I shouldn't have been writing that stuff and I didn't really want to but I felt pressured to. I want to in another story I'm writing but that's different because 1.) I don't mind writing it now, and 2.) I'm 18 so I'm more comfortable writing more mature scenes like that. These are things that make me want to unpublish the story. If I cut them then you guys can still read and I don't have to be as embarrassed to have it posted. Although it would probably be choppy around those scenes.
3.) ... I leave it in it's entirety. I understand you all like it and I know I'd be upset if a story I loved was going to be unpublished. I'd also be sad if scenes were cut out, I get that... I just hate keeping it up for the reasons stated above.
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The Lost Ones | Choni
Fanfiction"Geez, Cheryl! You're such a klutz!" She laughed as I quickly picked up my glasses and notebook that I dropped when I fell. Veronica was about to say something else but before she could, someone came to my defense. "Hey!" Toni Topaz yelled angrily a...
