HOUSE CLEANING: in which
the author neatly ties the loose ends,
plot holes + questions some may ask.enjoy :))
✴
HOW DID U COME UP W THIS?
so, writing this story was definitely
one that brought in some
feelings that i didn't know
i wanted to showcase but
here we are.despite it being less explicit than
i originally wanted it to be, i had
a moment to think about the plot.
and i didn't want it to be just
sexual, but more forming some
sort of kinship with each other.and in a sense, the plot simply progress
almost immediately and i liked where it
went—in a sense, where i got to tell
their story with their soft interactions.✴
WHY NAME IT TECHNICOLOR BEAT?
& WHAT WAS THE INSPIRATION BEHIND
SAID TITLE?as the title of the book is based off
oh wonder's song, i also wanted it
to be feminine and soft; i wanted to
show that softness that i don't see
much in wattpad, and in a relationship.✴
THE ENDING, WHY? :((
i personally think that, not
everyone gets a happy ending.the end chapter is bittersweet, yes.
why? because of the epilogue that
follows shortly after the ending.the epilogue, however, was tragic.
i initially wanted a five year arc
where the two lived out their lives
and joslyn dies from an unknown
disease—but i changed it to a more
darker end because it made sense, yk?✴
SIDE NOTE:
also, i'm really sorry that they
didn't end up together :((
i really wanted that too, but
that mysterious text is what led
to joslyn's death. again, i'm sorry.✴
THE STORY WAS QUICK;
WHAT WAS THE PROCESS
FOR WRITING THIS STORY?i didn't initially think of it, and then,
i just asked a few friends about it;
hence, leaving me to think about it
and immediately writing it down.from the writing to how the plot ended,
i really loved the whole concept, actually.
i just adored these two, as i know my
sister and her lover is similar to them.and i think, it's beautiful to see how
almost effortless the story progressed
and see how well the book flourished.also, i'd like to apologize for the tragic
ending—i think there was no other way
i wanted it to end, in a way, it helped alice
realize how much the two were having fun.✴
and so, here ends my thoughts.
i'd like to thank you, the reader,
for reading this ten chapter story.again, thank you for reading!
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technicolor beat | ✓
Short Storyin which the colorful alice sanchez meets her match, joslyn rosé gomez; a noir portrait that meets an abstract piece of art.