𝗔𝗕𝗬𝗦𝗦 : ᴬ ᴿᵉᵛⁱᵉʷ ˢʰᵒᵖ {𝐎𝐧 𝐇𝐨𝐥𝐝}

.˚ ᵎ┊͙ '𝗥𝗲𝘃𝗲𝗻𝗴𝗲'

Book Name : Revenge
Author : aesTAEtic_Tigress
Reveiwer : Mochi1316

𝗧𝗼𝘁𝗮𝗹 𝗠𝗮𝗿𝗸𝘀~100

𝐑𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐈𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧- 10/ 10
you had interacted very well

𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐂𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫- 10/15
Was the cover catch ?yes but was it telling about the book ?  ah may be or not. Your design was beautiful I loved it it was nice and perfect .But the cover was not telling about the book. It  made me think it was a sic-fic seeing the numbers or a school story. So just make it based on your story.

𝐓𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞- 7/10
there are many books that have such a title but the way you used it and explained in your story it is perfect. I would like may be in your next book to chose a unique title. These are my idea 'ready for it'

𝐃𝐞𝐬𝐜𝐫𝐢𝐩𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧-5/5
it made me curious like a cat hell yes I wanted to know more about Tae and jungkook and everything that I just ran to read your story. ( ps that is why I finished in a day as I did not sleep with the description you gave)

𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐏𝐥𝐨𝐭-10/10
awesome perfect I have no words cause I give you the garenty that I read your book word by word and I loved it. You had an excellent plot.

𝐏𝐥𝐨𝐭 𝐓𝐰𝐢𝐬𝐭𝐬-10/10
you gave me a jungshook to many times with jungkook rejection was the biggest shock. Jungkook's husband was alive it was perfect I loved it

𝐀𝐭𝐭𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧-8/10
it was very attractive a d eye catching like I was curious why whoes revenge and what about Tae but your cover made  me confused that is it a school book or Ceo and mafia. That is why you lost 2 marks

𝐆𝐫𝐚𝐦𝐦𝐚𝐫 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐕𝐨𝐜𝐚𝐛𝐮𝐥𝐚𝐫𝐲- 15/20
you have a nice grammar but your vocabulary can be improving,  by instead of explaining a lot you can use a word or the rest is fine

𝐄𝐦𝐨𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧-3.5/5
why cause u have only made an emotional bond with me ans Tae I am supposed to have a bond with jungkook but I don't have it so u lost half there

𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐃𝐞𝐯𝐥𝐨𝐩𝐞𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭-4/5
yeah I would like if you went a bit detailed it would be nice but that is my opinion

𝐀𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐬 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫 𝐇𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐓𝐨 improved:
Don't put things like qand a between  story and uneccary things cause the reader is to deep in reading and doing that again and again the reader gets annoyed that is why prevent adding in between the story and prefer at the end of the book.

𝐀𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐬 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫 𝐈𝐬 𝐆𝐨𝐨𝐝 𝐀𝐭:
your plot twist your Grammar it wa really nice and I loved it.

𝐘𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐎𝐩𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐨𝐧:
You have done a really nice job I love the book and I won't mind to read again. When I finished reading I was wondering why did you put your book in a review shop. As it is really good cause there were mini mistakes so it left me wonder why cause your book is so good as in my opinion a review shop is to help small authors to improve but you thought my that no matter how good you are there is room for Improvements.

𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 : 90.5/100

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