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Book Name : Dark Paradise Author : idyllickook Reviewer : taetaeficks. (other reviewer was busy, follow the payments kindly 💜)
𝗧𝗼𝘁𝗮𝗹 𝗠𝗮𝗿𝗸𝘀~100
𝐑𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐈𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧-08/10 Comments are from same 4 - 5 people. Even if there are same people, the interaction is good.
𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐂𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫- 15/15 The cover is pretty good. I like it, the one with all the brothers above and yoongi below. It's amazing, but the words you have written down there (below the title) can be little bigger.
𝐓𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞-10/10 Completely matches with the story and it's vibe.
𝐃𝐞𝐬𝐜𝐫𝐢𝐩𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧-05/05 It was great, really good. You have very well explained about the story in the description. It was only about the paradise and people trying to go there while Y/n didn't like it.
𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐏𝐥𝐨𝐭-08/10
𝐏𝐥𝐨𝐭 𝐓𝐰𝐢𝐬𝐭𝐬-07/10 I don't think there's any plot twists other than Namjoon being their leader, the story had just started and there's so much more to be revealed in upcoming chapters.
𝐀𝐭𝐭𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧-10/10
𝐆𝐫𝐚𝐦𝐦𝐚𝐫 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐕𝐨𝐜𝐚𝐛𝐮𝐥𝐚𝐫𝐲-20/20 The grammar and vocabulary is excellent. Absolutely different from other books, and you have also used many new words, which is good because it increases readers English skills.
𝐄𝐦𝐨𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧-04/05 There's too much of Authors point of view/third person view that I can't under Y/N's emotions very well.
𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐃𝐞𝐯𝐥𝐨𝐩𝐞𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭-04/05 Y/n should open up by herself and not by Author. It should be like, Y/n is directly telling the readers how she is feeling and what she is feeling.
