To Novaliera and Niderudion for being my first two characters ever
El Lune
"Tell me of the moon
Tell me of the moon,
Oh tell me of el lune
Is it bright?
Is it bright?
Is it oh so bright?
In the night sky
In the night sky
Oh look in the night sky
There it lies
There it lies
Oh here it lies
~
During a single full lune night
Everyone is wishing to be upon the same air
We have to be brave enough tonight
And we won't have to live in fear
This song I sing is a lullaby to you my friend
In the great night with thy who keeps our voices shallow
So I wish to you for this lullaby to be send
And maybe against the reedins who hearts are just fallow
Then I take a step and come to stand
So soon we be hand to hand
We battle beneath the daring lights
Those that save us from the darkened ones, Our Knights
The maiden shall dance in joy and delight
For she was saved from the bitter fight
It lasts until midnight
This honorable breathtaking sight
But we recall this so we don't have fear
Everyone is wishing to be upon the same air
Till the everylynds come to share...
~
Tell me of el lune
Tell me of el lune
Oh tell me of el lune
Is it bright
Is it bright
El lune is oh so bright
In the night sky
In the night sky
El lune is in the night sky
There it lies
There it lies
Oh here el lune lies
Tell me of el lune..."
AN//
Honestly this makes me feel accomplished and proud. So I originally started writing because of this one story I had in my head and couldn't get out of. In that story I had the sister character sing this song to her twin after going through being separated from the other for awhile. But the original was dull and just was low. I am just proud of this because based on the original I recreated it within an hour. For the sake of it, I show the original:
"During this full moon night, everyone is wishing to be upon the air. We just want to take a step and soon, we won't have to live in fear. The lullaby keeps the voices shallow, beneath the daring light. The knights will fight the dark hearted, and then the maidens will dance until midnight....everyone is wishing to be upon the air, so we don't have to live in fear....live in fear.... LIVE IN FEAR till the everlynds come to share...."
I thought of it because I took the book down last December or maybe last summer summer for editing to fix the plot holes the writing format and make it 3rd omniscient. Then during December I made the first four chapters. They were rewritten beautifully. Then recently I was feeling a bit nostalgic so I decided to look at some of my many ideas, rough drafts, and prologues. That was one of them I looked at. And my oh my, I looked through and thought. This story has a special place inside me. I generally think the story was fine with a few plot issues, but it was the format. See there are so many important characters and it has to be in their point of view to tell them what is going on, I changed the point of views endlessly. There wasn't a main character. I didn't go back in forth too much, but there might be three different point of views in one chapter and four switches. But sometimes there would be only two pov of view 2-3 switches or just one point of view. But the point of views had everything to do with the plot.
But now again I been rewriting it, The Legendary Forest.
(Hence my username was named after it)
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