21 was looking at Avoca's injuries and she knew she couldn't really help him because she didn't bring anything but she remembered that one of her father's (gero) labs was nearby and it's the one that she slept in
21: follow me
Avoca: why? Where are you taking me?
21: I'm gonna help you, just follow me
Avoca: (sighs)......fine.....
21: you're such a child
Avoca: what? how am a child?
21: always so moody and ignorant especially when someone is trying to help you
Avoca: fucking excuse me!! What did you say?
21: nothing.....I'm sorry (looks down), you had me worried, I was looking for you
Avoca: ....Why did I worry you, you don't even know me
21: I don't know why, but you looked injured and well I'm trying to thank you for saving me
Avoca (mind): I didn't even know she existed, I didn't even mean to save her.....
??? (Mind): No idea, you could of just told her when you first talked to her I guess
Avoca (mind): true but I just didn't really care, now it's gotten to out of hand, she is starting to follow me
??? (Mind): ......deal with it
21: so, how strong are you?
Avoca: ...what?
21: gosh, you're really nervous, have you ever talked to a cute girl before
Avoca: what!
21: (giggles) look we're here
Avoca: (silent) you're weird
21: did you say something?
Avoca: no...(mind) why did I say no!!
21: ok, follow me
Avoca: fine.....
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Couple minutes later:21: sit down there (points at a chair)
Avoca: .....(walks over and sits) (mind) why the hell am I still here?
??? (Mind): oooooh, now I know why you're listening to her and also why you haven't destroyed the planet
Avoca (mind): What? Ok what do you think?
??? (Mind): You're trying to get laid
Avoca (mind): ........ you're an idiot....
21 starts putting alcohol on the shoulder injury, which makes Avoca snap back into reality
Avoca: (tightens his hand) .....ok next time give me a warning
21: ....I did but you were in a deep thought I guess, maybe it's cause a cute girl is healing you're wounds (smiles and puts her hands on her waist as if she was a hero)
Avoca: .......
21: so shocked, I figured you out
Avoca: I'm shocked that I'm still here...
21: .....do you want me to be quiet (puts here arms around her stomach and looks down)
Avoca suddenly got a huge wave of sadness and all of a sudden stood up and hugged her
Avoca: I didn't mean it that way, it's just that....I.....
21: you don't trust me?
Avoca: everytime that I got sorta close with someone, they ended up dying, and you're really beautiful and watching you die would be that last thing I want to see
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The Evil Saiyan Avoca (Rewritten)
FanfictionThe story takes place on a planet where an ancient species of Saiyans lived on, however the story is mainly focused on a young saiyan named Avoca, he was sent to a very far planet, because the planet was being invaded, they sent him with more young...