I step to the edge of the water
The sand glitters with crushed jewels
The foam, frothy, swirls around my ankles
And as the ocean takes it back
my feet start
sinking into the sand.
*Opinions? Do you prefer the first and second lines where they are or do you think it would work better if I switch them?
VOCÊ ESTÁ LENDO
Leatherbound
PoesiaPoetry collection for my dad. Themes range from nostalgia to injustice to heartfelt. Despite its central topics, the collection attempts to return to a brighter tone from Violet's previous works.
