hold in the prelims

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"thats enough!!!!!!!!!", mito and kotaru were sent flying on opposite directions and a chakra suppression seal was placed on them when the dust was cleared they saw that naruto was in the middle with two burned hand while minato was standing beside him with a seal and thats when people saw something which was not noticed before, "why does that kid look so much like the fourth hokage?"

"why does the demon look so much like hokage-sama" a random jonin whispered to his teammate who is response looked confused and shook his head, many similar murmurs spread throughout the room confusing the genins and the non leaf shinobi who thought why they were calling that boy a demon

"minato check mito, il check kotaru, that was 3 tails worth of chakra at once and its bad, also people have started noticing our similarities" minato nodded and headed towards mito while naruto checked on kotaru but his eyes widened when he saw the seal sizzle away and more dense kyubi chakra leaking "MINATO!!!!" but it was too late as both mito and kotaru were once again covered with kyubi chakra and this time it was even denser and had four tails "shit, shit shit" naruto thought "everyone get out!!!!" he shouted as he dodged kotaru

 all the genins had already ran away but the jonin commanders of all the village and some genins did not run deciding to help them. naruto quickly teleported kotaru out of the way just as he was about to kill a squad of chunin "minato!!! lets do the flying raijin stage two super howling dance strike" minato nodded and naruto switched places with mito as both mito and kotaru were standing together, minato and naruto threw multiple kunai's at them and disappeared

 naruto quickly teleported kotaru out of the way just as he was about to kill a squad of chunin "minato!!! lets do the flying raijin stage two super howling dance strike" minato nodded and naruto switched places with mito as both mito and kotaru w...

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(like in the storm games but no kcm less destructive at the end )

when the smoke cleared naruto and minato were on their knees panting due to the stress that took, while mito and kotaru on the ground but the kyubi's chakra had not reseeded and they were already healing, in the corner of his eyes naruto saw satsuki jumping down and his eyes widened while his mind went overdrive a jolt of anxiety ran up his spine "satsuki!! no!!" but she did not listen as she activated her sharingan and took out her blade aiming for the twins, naruto tried to get up but he could not as 8 chakra tail simultaneously attacked her she jumped up to dodge them but their trajectory changed  and two chakra tails went straight through her stomach, naruto's world froze as he saw her body falling down and blood spreading everywhere, "no" he whispered his eyes filling with regret rage and sadness. he teleported to her and then to the hospital rushing her inside and asking for help

minato also got up as he saw naruto taking her away, he quickly commanded kakashi to get everyone out of here while he dodged mito, he threw a kunai at kotaru and teleported above him slamming a rasengan onto his back "flying raijin level two" he activated his sharingan and backflipped dodging mito, damn where was naruto, he cannot hurt his children and its paying him hard, if it were anyone else this fight would have been over but its his kids, he cannot hurt them

naruto after making sure satsuki was being operated teleported back to see minato dodging mito he swapped places with mito and stood beside minato "minato how is the nine tails releasing so much chakra?", minato though for a second before his eyes widened and after so many years a tickle of fear reached him "its the chakra lash" 

"huh?" 

"the nine tails must have been sending few bits of chakra for years and stopping it before it reaches there chakra coils , so even the seal is not broken its not able to hold so much chakra at once  when it released and all the chakra overflows like water out of a tap, its just gonna keep coming, that why the seal's burned away, it was just too much chakra"

naruto internally noted the kyubi's high intelligence before kicking kotaru in the air and then  drop kicked him "so the only way to stop this over flow is -" 

"if we block of the chakra paths with another chakra, closing the coils by burning them temporarily " 

minato nodded

 "but no chakra is that dense it would just burn away with the kyubi's  " 

"not if it biju chakra" 

naruto's eyes widened but he nodded "akari?" "you got it naruto-kun il concentrate on sending chakra towards your palm" 

"thanks" he whispered as he saw itachi and many other jonins entering the building probably after evacuating everybody else

"minato are you sure we cant just seal off the chakra?" minato shook his head and sighed, naruto's secret will not hold after this but whatever it takes to save them "but we need to be quick the dense chakra is burning away the seal and it can break" naruto nodded as he felt a familiar chakra beside him 

"can you use Tsukuyomi sensei?"

itachi nodded as he rushed towards mito, naruto teleported towards her as well and slammed a rasengan on her back, all the shinobi present had their eyes as wide as dinner plates as they saw the demon child/blond kid who apparently looked like the 4th perform the flying raijin.

"do you think that the kid is of the 4th?" asked a random suna nin

"that cant be possible, the 4th only has two kids, but considering that we didnt know they were jinchuriki i am not sure"

"yeah and he calls the hokage by his name"

"so why do we not know him as the 4th's son, and why are the leaf nin calling him demon?"

multiple talks like this spread through out the room as talk spread that naruto might be the son of the 4th

meanwhile itachi stared mito in her eyes and his eyes transformed revealing the mangekyo

"Tsukuyomi" itachi whispered and mito fell, naruto took this opportunity to concentrate akari's chakra to his right palm and smashing it on mito's gut effectively blocking off the chakra, minato while naruto was blocking off mito's chakra was dodging kotaru as kakashi used a lighting jutsu sending dogs made of lightning towards him

"minato bring kotaru here!!" he heard naruto shout

minato charged a rasengan as he teleported to kotaru, who saw him and held his tails of chakra as a dome surprising minato as he was sent flying back and crashing on a wall making cracks, naruto weaved through handsigns while telling kakashi to blow up the roof, to say kakashi was taken back by that was an understatement he was thinking naruto was downright crazy, naruto not getting a response cursed and finished his handsigns 

"wind style: dragon's breath"

naruto shot out a huge stream of air covering the entire roof and blowing it away , this gained everyone's attention who were amazed at this jutsu, naruto wasting no time threw a kunai in the sky and teleported him and kotaru to it they atleast a 100 ft in the air 

"this is sooo gonna hurt"

naruto weaved one handsign and took a deep breath 

"universal style: chakra overload"

everyone saw naruto and kotaru appearing high above in the sky and naruto weaving a sign then all they heard was a loud ringing sound as a huge explosion happened and naruto and kotaru fell towards the ground kotaru finally normal, kakashi and minato caught them as they saw naruto's hand burning and his entire body covered in his own blood while kotaru's shirt was ripped and  his seal had a hand print burning bright similar to mito's

"naruto" minato shook him but he did not move his chakra almost not sensible and fading

"naruto!!!!!!!!!"

sorry for so much late updates hope you like the chapter

ja ne

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