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Creativity:15 /15 I must say the creativity for the story is there. It's hilarious how the author wrote these two characters; it was just one chapter. Mind you, I will return to the story to read more. But the way the author fights these characters made me giggle. It was pure sarcasm throughout the whole chapter, and I loved it.
Originality:15 /15 Originality is a 100% original story. The way that the author did it was so unique because they didn't know where they lived on our planets. It's not like, hey, we live on Earth. No, they live on planets. Don't get me wrong, Earth is a planet, but they don't mention Earth here. They said Mars and other planets besides Earth, which is so unique to think that there are other civilizations besides Earth. Other people are living on different cultures or planets, my bad, besides Earth. And that is so awesome to read.
Storytelling:15 /15 Storytelling is impressive. The way the author writes the story is unique and beautiful, but the twist of sarcasm makes the story intriguing to read. It's not like a boring story where you wait for something interesting to happen. No, this story starts enjoyable from the start with the sarcasm. With the different personalities, it's exciting.
Character:15 /15 The characters are very different, but I feel like they will grow with each other or apart. So, there is a lot of character development in the beginning. The characters aren't timid; they're both very sarcastic. The main character is a little more acidic than the other one. But once you dive into the story, you will learn more about their history. But right now, what I read was phenomenal. The characters were well put together.
Story Flows:15 /15 The way the story flows is beautiful, pure beautiful, like there's nothing wrong with the story, the way that it flows, and the way that the characters seem like you're sitting next to them and your Whitney saw their bickering. And you're seeing their sarcasm and just in the moment with them. Amazingly, you can honestly picture these two big green back and forth. You can honestly see that she's her and the detail of her broken bone. You can honestly see how he wants to throw up because he sees how badly her bone is broken. But you can also see how timid and fragile she is like she's never broken a bone, and she's upset because he hurt her after he said he wouldn't hurt her. Then, he is sarcastic with her but doesn't let her princess attitude get to him.
Cover Design:15 /15 The cover is gorgeous. It will represent the story. It is a magnificent cover.
Final Thoughts:10 /10 I don't have anything wrong to say about this story. The author should be very proud of the story that they've created and the world that they have created. It's a phenomenal story, and it is one that I will be putting into one of my reading lists and coming back to.
Chapters I read:1
Total points: 100
Summary of the book:
The most dangerous woman in the galaxy is on the run...against her will.Chained to another fugitive, Sol finds herself miles away from home attached to the strangest person she's ever met. They find themselves stranded on a conquered planet and have to quickly find a way off before its hostile alien inhabitants find them first.
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