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Creativity:15 /15 I found this story to be slow-paced, and there's nothing wrong with this. It does take a while to get into the story, but it's still an interesting story the way the author writes it and how they base it on a family and the struggles of being obedient but also wanting what's suitable for you. It takes a toll on a lot of the story's main characters. But it's still interesting to read.
Originality: 10/15 I'm not sure if I would call this an original story. When it comes down to it, I've read stories similar to this where it's always about family. In this case, parents or relatives get upset because the child leaves home. But simultaneously, we're looking at two different families and their struggles.
Storytelling:15 /15 Once again, the storytelling is very slow, but you still get a terrific story. You still get to see it from different points of view and other family struggles. And different characters.
Character:15 /15 I feel bad for the characters because, at the end of the day, they're trying their best to survive and do what's best for them. But having parents that are in their way, you can't stop them from being who they are, just like you can't stop having spoiled siblings. The characters are well put together, and I can connect with them and what they are going through.
Story Flows: 15/15 I do find that the story has no errors or grammar errors. Everything flows very nicely, and the structure is sound. There's nothing wrong with it.
Cover Design:10 /15 I do feel like the cover is a little too basic. They could come up with a better cover to represent the book. Because I feel like the cover is bland for the story. The store is a good story, but I just feel like the cover doesn't do it justice.
Final Thoughts:10 /10 At the end of the day, the story is terrific, and I feel for the characters in the story because they struggle. They're trying to find themselves while doing what's best for family. But it's hard, and their struggle is trying to be a good child but also trying to live the way they want to.
Chapters I read:3
Total points: 90
Summary of the book:
It is the story of Renuka and Ajay who belonged to middle class families. They vowed to stand by each other in the days of happiness as well as sadness. They got married with the blessings of their elders. They loved and respected each other.There is no treasure greater than love. But can a person live with just love? Join us in this journey. Read to find out about Renuka and Ajay.
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