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The creativity is there. The story is very interesting. It's unique in its own way, and I appreciate that.
Originality: 15/15
The story is definitely a story I have not read, And I have reviewed a lot of books.
Storytelling: 10/15
I don't know how to describe the storytelling, even if it is. It's definitely different, but it gave me a hard time because I could connect and get a feel for the story.
Character:10 /15
The characters are interesting to read, but they need to grow a little more and develop a little more because I feel like they are in their early stages. I'm hoping that adds to the story's progress. So do the characters.
Story Flows:5 /15
The structure of the sentence flow and grammar need to be edited. The sentence structure needs to be a little bit better, and the flow needs to be semi-better than what it is for. There are some sentences that do not connect correctly.
Cover Design: 5/15
I feel the cover could be better if you need a different cover. I would recommend .
they have wonderful covers that they create beautiful work.
Final Thoughts: 10/10
At the end of the day, the story is a little more observed than the last one I reviewed, but it still needs a lot of editing and sentence structure. If they did that, the story would be a phenomenal story. Another thing that I feel that the story does need is a better cover that represents the story and pops a cover that will make the audience come to their story right now. I don't feel like the audience would come to their story for that cover that they have on there. Besides that, the story was a lovely story. But once again, it's not a story that I would continue to read or recommend, just because it still has a lot of certain structure and error that needs to be corrected. And it's still a hard read.
Chapters I read:2
Total points:70
Summary of the book:
"They may not be saints but they are definitely heroes of the unheard stories."- Shivansh singhania.Two broken souls tied in a marriage of convenience for the lives of 150 people and a mission.But what happened when finally that mission started , it opened the ghost of past, scratch the old wounds and threaten their present world ' their little angel '.Would they be able to save themselves from the clutches of the past and ensure the safety of their angel or the thread of fates binding their little world is going to be broken?Will they ever fall in love or the shadows of their past are never leaving them?Will they complete the mission? Follow the journey of Shivansh singhania and Kyra Kapoor in threads of fate to know the answers.
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