❄️Heroine❄️

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Creativity: 15/15

I think that this story is phenomenal. I think the way the author does this and the way that they create activity of this story is what makes this story phenomenal. The beginning, the prolouge, everything about this story is just out of the park. Amazing.

Originality: 15/15

I think the thing that I love about the originality of the story is the fact that the author takes you in the mind of like the murderer, but then at the end of the day you start back as like who you think might be the victim, but you're not sure. It's like the author is letting you guess what's going on, and that is what intrigues me about this story.

Storytelling:15/15

The storytelling I feel like it's mysterious. It's not really the normal storytelling of hey, I feel like you're reading a story to me or hey, I'm in the world of storytelling to me. I feel like I'm in the eyes of each point of view when it comes to the characters and you're trying to figure out what's going on.

Character:15 /15

Think the characters are unique in their own way. One thing they have so much room to progress. and develop. But I also think that the way the author does the characters are what make them unique because you know that each character has either secrets or something about them that they don't like or family issues. and you know among them is the killer.

Story Flows: 15/15

There were no grammar. sentence structure. or punctuation issues. that I saw

Cover Design: 15/15

I love the design of the story. I love the story design. I love the cover. I feel like the cover works well with the story. They represent each other very well. It's not too flashy, it's perfect the way it is.

Final Thoughts:10 /10

At the end of the day, I find that the story is very interesting and I can understand why the author has so many votes and comments. The story is lovely and I didn't see anything wrong with the story. The story is a very popular story. and it should be the way that the author is writing it. There is no doubt in my mind that this is meant to be either a bestseller if the author gets it published or just a really big on this app. I feel like as the author progresses with the story, it will get a lot more views. It'll get a lot more love. It will get a lot more votes  and I personally feel like it Should because of creativity that the author did and the  the way that the author is doing this story. Is it a story that needs a lot of trigger warnings? Of course. but  it still  a fantastic story. especially for people on this app that like stories like this one. So I hope that this author gets all the acknowledgement and all the reads and votes  that they deserve. because this story deserves it. And I'm honored that this author let me review their story.

Chapters I read: prologue and 3 chapters 

Total points:100

Summary of the book:

Rose Johnson, a kind but brutally blunt girl with a nose for bullshit, moves from Los Angeles to the gorgeous seaside town of Shady Cove. Nestled between the ocean and Oregon's towering redwoods, Rose quickly falls in love with the little town - only to discover that the very friendly townspeople are all hiding a dark and mythical secret. Love. Magic. Deception. War. It's all waiting for her here.Join Rose as she learns who the real monsters are.

AUTHORS WARNING

Remember that these are, in fact, my thoughts and only mine alone. You do not have to like them or agree with them in any way. But because they are my thoughts, they are final, which means they cannot be swayed or changed in any way. If you do decide to disagree with my thoughts and attack me directly in the comments or DM, I will block you and add you to a block list. Therefore, never reviewing your work ever again.

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