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I thought the story was very interesting when it came to the factor of creativity. I didn't think it was a very interesting story, and it had a lot going for it, even though it was fanfiction.
Originality: 10 /15
I will say that the story was very original. It had a lot of interesting things to it to some point. Other points are it still felt like a fanfiction. It was, to me, it still felt like very much a fan of cessing over a popular famous person.
Storytelling:10 /15 Once again, I found that the story was similar to the stuff that I've read, and the storytelling was a lot similar to what I need to read not saying that it was not a good story, but there was just a lot that I felt was just basic and the same as stories I've read in the past.
Character:15 /15
I can say that I really did enjoy the characters. I felt that Is plenty of room for character development, and even though it was a very short story And didn't have a lot of chapters the chapters I did we, you could definitely tell that the characters would grow.
Story Flows:15 /15 I didn't see any grammatical errors or any mistakes or any sentence structural errors when it came to the story.
Cover Design: 15/15 I did enjoy this story when it came to the cover. The cover complements the story very well.
Final Thoughts: 10/10 At the end of the day, the story is a really good story, but once again, I am not a big fan of it. I feel like sometimes fanfiction goes overboard, and people start obsessing over famous people to the point where it gets sickening to me. Mind you, this is not to be me. This is not to be a malicious person. This is just my thoughts on fanfiction much as I do read it. There are some really good Fanfictions out there that are phenomenal that you would not know it our fanfiction base because they actually make it so that it feels like it's just a famous person living a normal life, and that's the stuff that I like to read, but besides that, the author does have good Concepts good ideas I did enjoy their story the one thing I was not a big fan of is they had a lot of pictures or text or something and I feel like that took away from the story besides that I do feel like the story was indeed an interesting story to read for people that are big on fanfiction.
Chapters I read:3
Total points: 90
Summary of the book:
Uncover the secret love story between two of the biggest stars in the entertainment industry - the charming idol Kim Taehyung and the YouTube sensation Jeon Jungkook. With millions of fans drooling over them, discover the hidden romance that they have kept under wraps... Warnings: - This story is purely author's imagination so don't take it seriously. - The storyline is completely mine and I don't allow any translations. - Top Tae and bottomkook
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Remember that these are, in fact, my thoughts and only mine alone. You do not have to like them or agree with them in any way. But because they are my thoughts, they are final, which means they cannot be swayed or changed in any way. If you do decide to disagree with my thoughts and attack me directly in the comments or DM, I will block you and add you to a block list. Therefore, never reviewing your work ever again.
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