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- The book was quite fun and relatable to read! The writer did such a good with the perspective of Emma and portraying her emotions. The title was pretty nice but I believe it could have been improve a little bit more. The cover shows the title very well which I'm really glad of, however they could have refined the cover by perhaps putting Taylor in the center and making the boarders a little thinner. The blurb is quite interesting and gives a intro to the character however it could have been just a little more interesting with more adjectives. The same goes for the writing style. I really like how readable their style is but they could have been more detailed when describing the emotions of emma during the emotional scene. The pacing was marvelous and done so well! I love how they have given so much detail into the small parts of Emma's life, which is what raises their creativity, nevertheless, perhaps they could have written more unique events in the book to make it better. I had a lot of fun reading this book and I wish luck to the writer for improving, because they have a lot of potential!
- The book was applauded in a fundamental way. The cover art was so extraordinary, and it matched the genre so well, hence,; it got a high rating from me. What is wonderful is that the author succeeded in capturing the whole plot in his first sentence and drawing the attention of the readers. Though the storyline was great, there are aspects that need to be worked on too. The author's expertise in the proper usage of grammar and choice of words made this reading easy to understand and interesting. The character development was really nicely done, but it could have been better. In addition to the writing style, it was nicely written and captivating so that it could easily draw and retain the attention of any reader. The plot being a twist keeps tension high and the readers interested, but it could be more effective. The readers of the book took a favorable position towards it; this suggests that reader involvement was on an acceptable level and their impression was good. This book obtained an optimum mark of 85/100, with improvement areas being detailed plot development and rich characterization.
Book Title - 4/5 marks: It's a very beautiful title that goes well with the book's theme but there's a book with the same title so it's not original.
Book cover - 4/5 marks: The cover is well made but the text needs to be placed at the centre and the font is to be changed as well. The author's name is not as visible.
Book description - 4.5/5 marks : The description is well written although It's quite long. Either give the description of the characters or the scene.
Plot - 9/10 marks: The Plot is amazing! It's unique and refreshing but I have read quite a few books with the same concept so I deducted a mark for that although, the author did a good job with it.
Grammar and vocabulary - 19/20 marks: The grammar is accurate and the vocabulary is used well. It's simple and elegant.
Character development - 13/15 marks: The character development was not very well portrayed for the male lead.
Writing style - 9/10 marks: The writing style is very elegant and matches with the theme of the story although, judging my the timeline, the dialogues needs a little editing to match with the theme.
Plot twist - 10/15 marks: The plot twist was somewhat predictable and not very shocking. Although the description was up to the mark. The plot twist might need some improvement.
Your opinion on the book - 5/5 marks: I really love the theme and the writing style of the author. It was my first time reading a book like this and I am definitely impressed.
Reader's interaction and hook - 5/10 marks: Need to work on the hook. There aren't many hooks there and although, the reader's are loving the book, the author should interact with the readers.
