Coma (Percy jackson fanfiction)

Nope! The world still has hope.....

Percy's Pov :

I heard annabeth begging me. I tried to stop myself but it is just TOO strong ( Refering to Gaia's magic)

I heard her fell to the ground.

Oh Boy. I am going to kill my girlfriend.I will regret all of eternity and not forgive myself if I do that.I took a deep breath and used all my energy to stop myself. 

It worked !!!

I succeeded. Not only did I stopped myself from killing Annabeth , I could feel my limbs again!!! I am not in a coma anymore!

I am opened my eyes as I saw Annabeth below me, covering herself but not escaping as if she was waiting for me to swing my sword.

"A-an...nabeth" I tried to say with a smile.

She looked up and saw me. Tears in her eyes. She stood up and hugged me. I gave her a tired smile and collapse.

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Is the plot ok ?