Timing is essential.
It means your story could either be really slow, have a great build up and ending OR it could be too quick, a good storyline, but not nearly enough time to develop a relationship.
This is my bbbiiigggesst problem when I'm writing - I start a new story and get way too excited on getting to the lovey dovey bits, rather than building up to it.
ONE THING THAT REALLY ANNOYS ME -besides other things- is when people misspell almost everything.
It's hard to write a mistake free story, but when I read stories with frequent misspellings of things like 'your' instead of 'you're', I feel like putting my head through a wall.
not quite, but yeah.
Here's an example:
Harry and I were sat looking intoo each others I's.
"Your relly pretty Loueh."
I blushd, "O stap, Haz. Do yu no wher Nil, Lim and Zen have gon?"
"Ye, their over there."
A short and innacurate anecdote about Louis' terrible spelling.
I don't even know what this was...
But I hope you get the picture!
CHECK YOUR SPELLING AND GRAMMAR and I'll love your cliche free, brilliantly titled story :3
